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Blush
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0 posted 2003-07-30 10:05 AM






Happiness softly erased the sad from the night
As two hearts merged with joy then descend in flight
Cascading into abyss of emotions
Heart to heart
Drifting
Upon loves winged unicorn~
Essence of tender wings founded an isolated paradise
Where bliss flows like a river
Heaven was so precise
Love blossom as elysian fields of wildflowers
A garden of Eden
Animated by joys effervescing powers~
Meantimes rain of angry storms poured down upon paradise
The demise of love was brutal, exorbiant price
Loves tender wildflowers slowly disfigured and thorned
The loving creature evolved with two hearts
Viciosly horned~
The memory reaches to capture the splendor that was born
Always to be lured in the pain
Garden of thorns
Only joyful wings of the heart can enter
Into loves paradise
And then percieve with profund tender loving emotions
True love within its awesome wonder
As it is softly born~



Molly Susan Vessels

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (07-30-2003 05:23 PM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-07-30 10:12 AM



You certainly don't need any lessons in desciptive writing! That was wonderful!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-07-30 11:49 AM


OhMolly~
This is really pretty~

'Only joyful wings of the heart can enter
Into loves paradise
And then percieve with profund tender loving emotions
True love within its awesome wonder
As it is softly born~'


Like that poetic thought most of all~

Welcome to Passions dear lady~
We're going to become good friends ... I can tell~

You are welcome to drop me a note at noles1@totcon.com anytime you'd like.
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunnyone
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3 posted 2003-07-30 11:51 AM


Enjoyed this lovely write that captured my imagination so fully!! We're so glad to have you here...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Balladeer
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4 posted 2003-07-30 05:24 PM


Very beautiful picture and writing, miss. Write on!!
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