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Open Poetry #27

New World

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2003-07-30 04:39 AM

Beginning

Chaotic explosions cause
widespread havoc.
Tumultuous winds scatter
churning , boiling waters
to far flung points.

Then calm.

Green tendons struggle
through rocky pores.
Minute species crawl unsteadily
from beneath giant boulders.

A far distant luminous glow
supplies light and warmth.

Nature embraces
the birth of the
beginning of time.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-30 04:42 AM

Wow, this is stunning..Reminds me of something..but I'm not sure.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2003-07-30 06:10 AM

The dawn of a new world...what a great theme you have portrayed here!! This is marvelous, and reminds me of the series of books I am reading now about the lives of the first people on earth. Excellent writing...~~S~~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-07-30 06:54 AM

From simple words,
so much life.

Thank you, Maggie!

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

4 posted 2003-07-30 01:10 PM

Thank you kaoru.Sunnyone and Sunshine for your encouragement. Maggie

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