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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-07-29 09:46 PM


TWENTY OR LESS...#127

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon


Your struggle

dependent upon
learned irony

as others look on

free your will and leave


suffering


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-08-01 01:56 AM



angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-08-01 02:04 AM


MVS:You are amzing me tonight.So much said in such few words.
angelblueyes

x8x_bigmike
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3 posted 2003-08-01 02:06 AM



free your will and leave


suffering

_________
so when you leave your still struggling in suffer, and ironically you still havent left.  well done.

Mike

Snowflake From Hell
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4 posted 2003-08-01 02:06 AM


i agree with them

Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2003-08-01 02:51 AM


QjQ:

Crystal:  It's all in the interpretation...  I'm pleased to amaze you.

Mike:  that's one way of looking at it...  Thank you for your thoughts.

Snowflake From Hell:  thanks for the concurrence.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-08-01 03:01 AM


yes
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-08-01 05:33 AM


Like this...James
MARK V SHELDON
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8 posted 2003-08-01 11:17 AM


passing shadows and JamesMichael -- thank you both.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Midnitesun
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Gaia
9 posted 2003-08-01 06:15 PM


in winged release
unencumbered by the structured cocoon
the body and spirit fly freely



smiling at this one Mark

MARK V SHELDON
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10 posted 2003-08-02 12:53 PM


Kacy:  "The ohhhhhnly way to fly..."

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

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