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Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2003-07-29 07:35 PM


You are a man of honor, a gentle spirit
You wonder if all wrongs can be rectified
You hear past haunts disturbing your slumber
You see beauty in the soaring bird's view
You want reassuring warmth found when two palms join
You are a man of honor, a gentle spirit

You pretend a man must be unwavering and confident
You feel sad when inner peace is interrupted
You touch the Iris and smile at its purpose
Your worries do not overtake your resolve
You cry inwardly and alone
You are a man of honor, a gentle spirit

You understand the crossing may be dangerous
And say fear must not delay the adventure
You dream not in half-measures,
try whole-heartedly until each goal is reached
in hopes of finding the satisfying balance
You are a man of honor, a gentle spirit

I bought my share of mistakes so I might see some interest.
~Dorene

© Copyright 2003 Dorene M. Harris - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-07-29 07:46 PM


You dream not in half-measures,
try whole-heartedly until each goal is reached
in hopes of finding the satisfying balance
You are a man of honor, a gentle spirit

This reminds me of a special someone,  
and I enjoyed the read very much.

Nice tribute to all men, especially those who measure up!  
(hmmmmm, that doesn't sound right)
Wonderful poem, Chanson~

Chanson
Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
2 posted 2003-07-29 11:18 PM


Yes, he does measure up. He is a wonderful friend. *s

Thank you muchly, Blue!

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2003-07-30 12:09 PM


~This is beautiful, Chanson, and it is nice that there really are men of honour left in this world...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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