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Tenderness |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Tenderness day stripped leaving the sky freckled in stars a rare moment tenderly unmoved in serenity to where winds whisper and night waits for caress "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice you do tenderness well Gloom |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Very tender and beautiful write. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
nice  bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ You are just so softly *gifted*~ 'leaving the sky freckled in stars' This is originality personified ! WONDERFUL !!!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful red |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know I like the freckled part...lol freckles are beautiful, so I'm told |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
There are certain poets who are blessed with grace, wisdom, and a gentleness that soothes the reader's soul......you, my friend, are one of the special ones, with a talent for drawing me in as I read.....this was a very special piece, and I loved it.....~~S~~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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