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Even The Stars Cry
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Even The Stars Cry |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Your eyes look away to hide from sadness so deep even the stars cry. You no longer try to find the love thats inside now that the stars cry. You no longer see a world meant for you and me and so the stars cry. Alone and lonely to afraid to reach for me thats why the stars cry. |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
Oh Paula, this is beautifully sad...next time I look at the stars, I shall wonder about the tears...~V~ I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write but sad contents...  bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very emotional, and well done. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HiPaulaGal~ LOVE a good title ... this one brought me in and the write held me~ Lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Beauty from sadness. Good work here. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...reminds me of the song... "Don't let the stars get in your eyes, dont let the moon break your heart."...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed. . . well done. . . a unique form that lends itself nicely to the words. . . great work. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person, but to one person, you may be the world. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
SUch sadness from deep emotion, but beautifully written. angelblueyes |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 very sad...like the ones I always love |
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