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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-07-29 01:06 AM



+*+*+*

When I was just
a girl of ten,
I knew this boy
whose name was Ben.

He only played
with his pet frog,
whom he had raised
from pollywog.

He cared not what
the kids all said,
he only cared for
his frog Fred.

He took his pet
each day to school,
even though
that broke the rule.

Fred could croak,
his ABC's,
and read Shakespeare
aloud with ease.

Ben was proud
of his small bud,
all green and slimy
and caked with mud.

One day wee Fred
got under foot,
and Ben did crush him,
with his boot.

He stood there stunned,
and horrified,
at how his friend
had croaked and died.

Next day his folks,
bought Ben a doggy,
to take the place
of Fred the Froggy.

He bought green paint
and sprayed the dog,
then taught it how
to croak like frog.

The froggy-doggy,
became his friend,
and this tall tale
has come to end!

+*+*+*




[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-29-2003 01:19 AM).]

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-07-29 01:29 AM


LOL, wow..Poor Fred!


ecrivan
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2 posted 2003-07-29 01:46 AM


had a chuckle..enjoyed the read


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3 posted 2003-07-29 02:06 AM


Linda, this is so sweet and cute...
just like you are......
Hugs, sweet friend  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-07-29 04:23 AM


hehehe
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5 posted 2003-07-29 05:38 AM




RIBBET!

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Patricia
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6 posted 2003-07-29 06:08 AM


EA...well, you got a chuckle, my friend.  Thanks for this early morning smile.  

Patricia

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7 posted 2003-07-29 07:32 AM



Kahlil
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8 posted 2003-07-29 08:23 AM


hahaha!   this is great!
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-07-29 08:43 AM


Earth Angel
You have a quick mind
And not unkind. LOL enjoyed

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10 posted 2003-07-29 08:52 AM


Poor frog but I can't help smiling.  Maggie
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11 posted 2003-07-29 10:04 AM


hehehe This is so cute. I'll never look at a frog, or a dog the same way...hahaha

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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12 posted 2003-07-29 10:43 AM


Cute rhymes. Laugh challenge well met.
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13 posted 2003-07-29 12:23 PM


This reminds me of my friend named Fred... whose wife treats him like a dog! LOL

Thoroughly enjoyed, angelic one! *S*

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14 posted 2003-07-29 12:36 PM


Nicely done. I really like the end, it kept me smiling!
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15 posted 2003-07-29 05:40 PM


Smiling from this end of the swamp.

Hugs ...

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16 posted 2003-07-29 05:49 PM


This was great, Earth Angel!  I just finished babysitting at a neighbor's house and this was a cute read after spending most of the day with a toddler.  My mind was already in kid-zone!  Keep 'em comin'!  
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17 posted 2003-07-29 06:11 PM


Poor little Fred! Did Ben bring the dog to school too?

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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18 posted 2003-07-30 06:39 AM


Poor little froggy who turned into a doggy. No that doesn't sound right. Kiss a frog
Ahhhhhhhhh. Oh dear my mind is wondering again.
Good one.
Bon-Bon

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19 posted 2003-07-30 08:30 AM


Kaoru ~

Lament: "Poor Fred, is dead."


EA

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20 posted 2003-07-30 08:31 AM


ecrivan ~

Chuckles are contagious! hahaha!


EA

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21 posted 2003-07-30 08:32 AM


Ethel ~

Awwww, shuckums.....

huggums,
Linda

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22 posted 2003-07-30 08:33 AM


passing shadows ~

hehehhe hahaha hohohoo teeeeeheeeee!


EA


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23 posted 2003-07-30 08:35 AM


Gem ~

He's ALIVE!!!  He's ALIVE!!!

Huggums,
Linda

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24 posted 2003-07-30 08:35 AM


Patricia ~

You are most welcome! Enjoy your day!


Linda

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EA

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26 posted 2003-07-30 08:37 AM


Kahlil ~

Glad you got a hahaha out of it!

Huggums,
EA

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27 posted 2003-07-30 08:38 AM


Mr. T. ~

---a poem!--just for l'il ole me?!?

Have a great day, T-Man!

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

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28 posted 2003-07-30 08:40 AM


cusick ~

lol  I think we're both sick! !

Love 'n laughter,
EA

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29 posted 2003-07-30 08:41 AM


SharaRose ~

What about a froggy-doggy? Will you not ever look at one of those the same way ever again either?  

Huggums,
EA

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30 posted 2003-07-30 08:42 AM


eminor_angel ~

Thank you! Thank you very much!

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

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31 posted 2003-07-30 08:43 AM


Suthern ~

I think you missed your calling! You should have been a stand-up comedienne!

Lovin' hugs,
EA

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32 posted 2003-07-30 08:45 AM


P_P_P ~

Thanks for the inspiring laughter challenge!

Warm hugs & smiles,
EA

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33 posted 2003-07-30 08:46 AM


Marti ~

Glad yer smilin', fellow Swamp Girl!

Luvvums,
Linda

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34 posted 2003-07-30 08:47 AM


VBallNut ~

Something tells me that someone who has a name like yours, also has a sense of humor!

Love 'n laughter,
EA

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35 posted 2003-07-30 08:49 AM


skyshine ~

You bet he took him!--and Froggy-Doggy was a real hit with the kids and now Ben is the most popular kid at school!

Huggums,
EA

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36 posted 2003-07-30 08:50 AM


Bonnie ~

I love it when your mind wanders!  It's a beautiful thing to behold!

Huggums,
Linda

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37 posted 2003-07-30 05:42 PM


Earth Angel,

Do I detect a dare in your tone of voice?  ;o)

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38 posted 2003-07-30 05:45 PM


very nice write n read,,
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39 posted 2003-07-31 12:55 PM


Well, at least there's a (somewhat) happy ending to all this. lol

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

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40 posted 2003-07-31 11:36 AM


VBN ~

Perhaps you do! Perhaps you don't!, Dear Bally Nut! lol

Love 'n Laughter,
EA

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41 posted 2003-07-31 11:37 AM



Than-Q

EA

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42 posted 2003-07-31 11:38 AM


skyshine ~

lol--I know what you mean!

Huggums,
EA

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43 posted 2003-07-31 09:00 PM


Good grief!!! A poem about a pet frog who died and a dog that was treated like a pet frog to replace it....and she made it delightful and funny!!! I'm losing it!! Beam me up! I LOVED IT!!!! :supergrni:
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44 posted 2003-07-31 09:12 PM


A terrific response to the challenge Linda. I greatly enjoyed it...I think this is one for the books.

hugss
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45 posted 2003-08-01 12:53 PM


Balladeer ~

Now that was a very complimentary response to my stab at writing humor!--especially since it is coming from you!

Thanx, Dear Ball of Deer!

Huggums snuggums,
EA

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46 posted 2003-08-01 12:56 PM


Nakdthoughts ~

I am blown away by all these wonderful replies!--and thank you for that remark "this one is for the books"!


Linda

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