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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2003-07-28 11:11 PM



And, the wind was taken
from our sails...

It was always a rocky journey
between the two of us.
A storm was always brewing
and the waves overwhelmed
our shaky vessel, threatened
to capsize our tiny ship.
We were often in the eye
of a hurricane...waiting for
the high powered winds to rage,
the tempestuous seas to roar.

I hoped for calm seas,
for the touch of serenity,
but it never came my way.
I tried to sail out of the storm
but my sails were flattened
without the gusting winds
to fill them to billowy fullness.

And, when the wind was taken
from our sails, it left us
sitting in a world of going
nowhere. Time was very unkind.
So, I jumped ship, set sail
by myself and caught the last
of my heart, the tale of the wind.

[This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (07-28-2003 11:14 PM).]

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-07-28 11:33 PM


Very gusty write I too was strom tossed in the reading of it.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-07-29 04:10 AM


I love this!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-07-29 07:40 AM


Enjoyed...James
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
4 posted 2003-07-29 07:57 PM


I always enjoy your poetry Ivy Rose~
But even more, I love the thought behind your title.

Be well sweet poetess~

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