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In the Mainstream |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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In the mainstream fish fries hatch in still waters the salmon takes on its classic coat subjected to current flux like classic floats A show of wills..transports its masters who will arrive, the sooner or faster from the corners of the earth, all laden with gifts and a star that shone bright and had me miffed test of skills..determined wills ones made to sign, to ethereal designs A moment of will, a test of strength wake up my darlings before its too late from the boredom that surrounds city dwellers to the movement in traffic all helter-skelter Directed lives to a chosen path remembered the initiated chosen swath, Is it a ramdom assortment of causes without ends and a laisser-faire attitude that makes no amends? show of wills, directed skills sharpened wits emerge from pits floated in the mainstream, on a rapid course arguments raised till voices grow hoarse: "who will arrive sooner or later is diminished in size or made much greater". [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-29-2003 01:20 AM).] |
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jaysh Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 133IL, USA |
"who will arrive sooner or later is diminished in size or made much greater" I liked that. Good write, i look forward to reading more! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Thanks jaysh, you'll find lessons in life here and there  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
As always you speak in riddles of life that are worth fishing for and getting hooked on. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear riddle master, you be not one with a laisser-faire attitude!   EA |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hi Keth, good to hear from you! funny wasn't thinking about hooking fish here but that gives me another idea..hehe  Linda do my best [This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-29-2003 01:31 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Martin, yours are ones I must read in silence without distraction |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Passing I have to admit though this one came in stages, and most should I think from now on.. it's amazing what the mind knows it has to put down but is not ready to do so at first and then there is another burst of creativity..enjoy |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write n read,,  |
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