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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-07-28 07:17 PM



early morning sunrise
gives us the first light
of love our eyes focus
across our pillows
connecting rememberences
of night
~
each day
I awaken with you
brings a imagery to
my thoughts
I'm mesmerized by
absolute feelings you
project from your heart
to me





[This message has been edited by QjQ (07-28-2003 08:13 PM).]

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Gabriel Frost
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Between midnight thoughts
1 posted 2003-07-28 08:08 PM


Beautiful...my god, i wish i had this.
SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-07-28 10:35 PM


Wonderful thoughts for the one you love. Very pretty senses of lace laid on the skin with a tenderness seem to come to mind. VERY very pretty words. Very tender thoughts for another. Sweet,and gentle.

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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Ivy Rose
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3 posted 2003-07-28 10:41 PM


QjQ...An absolutely honest and pure moment of true love in this wonderful poem.
***Ivy Rose

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-07-29 04:17 AM



QjQ
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5 posted 2003-07-29 07:52 PM



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