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QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-07-28 03:57 PM

her arms encircle my oaken body
like
twisted vines

kisses from her lips make me
quiver
like leaves in the wind

sparkles shimmer from her eyes
with
loving reflections

drifting scents of honeysuckle
cloud
around us

we our prisoners held capitive
in
the mingle of the cool nite air

as we surrender to each other to
extinguish
our passions of love

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-07-28 04:51 PM

What beatufiul words, and such beautiful things happen to fulfill them. Lovely, lovely words!!!! Amazing for such a short write. One of the most beautiful things that can happen between two people. Very pretty.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2003-07-28 07:23 PM

Whooo! very passionate! enjoyed it!

Thanks~ARH

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

3 posted 2003-07-28 08:00 PM

Oh Q...how beautifully your romantic words fell upon the page. Indeed one of your best writes.

Patricia

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2003-07-29 01:59 AM

enjoyed the passion put to poetry

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-07-29 02:01 AM

we our prisoners held capitive
in
the mingle of the cool nite air

as we surrender to each other to
extinguish
our passions of love

Oh yes, Glenn. My Love and I know
this very well.

Hugs to you,

Ethel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-07-29 02:40 AM

whew! very sensual write Glenn...makes me think...too much

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2003-07-29 09:48 AM

very lovely

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-07-29 09:24 PM

enjoyed

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2003-07-29 09:43 PM

Outstanding imagery! TD

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