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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-07-28 08:09 AM



So I Hang On In Hope

The week passed by
I was wishing and hoping
So I hang on in hope
Became a way of coping

Being foolishly misled
Wishes never came true
So I hang on in hope
Then write of missing you

I wrote of my gratitude
Expressed a special way
So I hang on in hope
My heart longing each day

Notes that say I care
My heart longing wistfully
So I hang on in hope
Perhaps soon he will see

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Patricia
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1 posted 2003-07-28 08:20 AM


Notes that say I care
My heart longing wistfully
So I hang on in hope
Perhaps soon he will see

Oh Hope...  Your words speak to me here.  I am going to hang onto hope...but I have also turned this one over to Him so that I can get some peace.  If it is meant to be...it will be.

A wonderful write!

Patricia

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2 posted 2003-07-28 08:49 AM


Being foolishly misled
Wishes never came true
So I hang on in hope
Then write of missing you


Missing, longing, yearning.. and still hangin' on?
Good

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-07-28 08:53 AM


HopeS
That is the name of the game, a very good write.

Margherita
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4 posted 2003-07-28 09:20 AM


Dear Hope your words are very touching. It's good not to lose Hope! But make sure there is no one else hoping to touch your heart. I understand you have eyes and ears only for him ... but who knows?
Much love, Margherita

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5 posted 2003-07-28 09:25 AM


Notes that say I care
My heart longing wistfully
So I hang on in hope
Perhaps soon he will see


Yes, Hope, perhaps he wil see.
You know that I hope he will!
Hugs  
Ethel


SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-07-28 10:46 AM


This is so sweet. So touching...the sweetness that is here.. Lovely to read. What a sweet heart you have.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-07-29 04:53 AM


don't wait around too long ladyfriend
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