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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-07-27 10:52 PM



On blue stationary
I've penned my thoughts
taking care to let them flow
easy down the middle.

Not until I met you
did the cursive bend predictably
with strokes and angles
lifting off the page.

You have dotted my eye
and crossed my heart
with a simple elegance
gracing me in the limelight.

Consider this my thank you letter
for granting me a Cinderella moment
sealed with a kiss
on blue stationary.


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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-07-27 10:56 PM



Consider this my thank you letter
for granting me a Cinderella moment
sealed with a kiss
on blue stationary.

dont you just love those moments, before they turn into pumpkins.......lol

Tim
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2 posted 2003-07-27 10:59 PM


a nice write,
especially liked the dotting my eye and crossed my heart lines. enjoyed.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-07-27 11:01 PM


How very lovely Lori!
I so much enjoyed reading you tonight.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-07-27 11:06 PM


I love the way you say thank you
what a lucky one indeed to receive
such a beautiful message
tweets
xxoo

ctowen
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5 posted 2003-07-27 11:06 PM


The moment was always there,

     right beside the talent.


          Acknowledging its presence

                was all that the blue's meant.
  I have penned with you, and seen this Blue's light!


    * If you are having trouble with a Duet,
                we could try another.
                     Interested?

              

[This message has been edited by ctowen (07-27-2003 11:11 PM).]

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-07-27 11:12 PM


Very nice...James
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7 posted 2003-07-27 11:27 PM


Aww this is beautiful
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
8 posted 2003-07-27 11:29 PM


Simply beautiful a perfect write
Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-07-27 11:42 PM


Gadzooks! That's gorgeous!

You have written several clever and memorable lines!--

"you dotted my eye
and crossed my heart"

Great writing as usual, dear Bluesy One!


Linda

SharaRose
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10 posted 2003-07-28 12:15 PM


Very sweet grateful heart for having a place to go, and let your thoughts be read! Kind of like a soft comfy blanket of home. Very nice.   

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2003-07-28 01:40 AM


Michele, I'm talking about a frog!!  

Hi Tim~  How nice of you to show up, thank you.

Thanks for always letting me know Nancy~  Hugs back!

Ribbit, ribbit, to say nothing of the prince!!     Thanks tweets~

You're a doll, thank you Craig, for everything you said.

James~ so nice of you too.

Skyfire~ I'm glad you thought so, thanks.

Gee, thanks Raph,  really!

Earth Angel~ Gadzooks she says!!!  I love that word!  Thanks for always leaving a smile.  Hugs ya, Linda~

Hi SharaRose~ To tell you the truth, a throw blanket came to mind.
I'm glad you picked up on that.  Thank you and welcome to passions.

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-28-2003 01:58 AM).]

passing shadows
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12 posted 2003-07-28 03:37 AM


the last man that dotted my eye got dotted back before spending the weekend in the county jail

good write Lori, I really can relate and love it

inkedgoddess
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13 posted 2003-07-28 07:08 AM


yea, i know the frog...he strikes us all, at times, .........what is wrong with these men?

Duncan
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14 posted 2003-07-28 08:54 PM


"Consider this my thank you letter
for granting me a Cinderella moment
sealed with a kiss
on blue stationary."

How often does a frog get the chance to turn into a pumpkin, eerrrr, I mean...Prince???  Love that purple!     
Consider it my pleasure...  

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15 posted 2003-07-28 09:09 PM


BluesSerenade~
This is just the loveliest write~
So softly penned~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

icebox
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16 posted 2003-07-28 09:41 PM


That is a nice write.

I hope he got the point.

Nightshade
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17 posted 2003-07-28 10:14 PM


You have dotted my eye
and crossed my heart
with a simple elegance
gracing me in the limelight.

Hey Bluesylady !! This is another peach of a write from your for my libary! hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

Janette
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18 posted 2003-07-28 10:29 PM


Ohhhhhhhhh I adore this one ... truly I do!
BluesSerenade
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19 posted 2003-07-28 11:40 PM


Ha, Dixie~  I wasn't heading in that direction, the thought of spending a single minute in jail is enough to make my skin crawl!!  Furthermore, I am my own warden, what a concept huh?  Thanks for reading, love ya gal!!

I think a frog has a lot in common with the queen bee,
they're both looking to be crowned.  Hugs Michele~

I'll consider it, my pleasure in purple????
You've got the color all wrong Duncan.
That's Bluesy to you... don't be losing me before the clock strikes.
Warm smiles for you, and thanks.

Marge~  Thank you so much!!

icebox~ he can take it any way he wants, a gift, if a gift, is a gift.
And I thank  you for yours.

I'm so happy to be sitting pretty in your library.
Thank you for the honor Chris~

Janette~  Ohhhhhhhhhhh, hmmm, that's  all it takes.  

vandana
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20 posted 2003-07-30 06:15 PM


enjoyed
Mysteria
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21 posted 2003-07-30 06:26 PM


Well now, that was sure a fairytale tender write, and I think some of us have had that moment in the blue too!  I lost my glass slipper though
BluesSerenade
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22 posted 2003-07-30 10:17 PM


Thank you for reading vandana and Mysteria~
It's old news already!!!

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