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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-07-27 06:17 PM




You are stranger to me
the one I know so well

Pitiful exhale
caught past lung, in heart

When will the breathe of this
fill your throat?

Choke from dislodged words
usher you to back row

Watch how my back breaks
show you pain beyond the act

As curtain falls, so do I
for nothing but the end.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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Wind
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1 posted 2003-07-27 06:20 PM


bompbompbomp...

hello Gem Page,
I see you are getting along fine. sigh..try littlewing's challenge? it's fun, great poem blahblahblahblah..

goodbye

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-07-27 06:32 PM


"You are stranger to me
the one I know so well."

--No matter how well we believe we know someone, there will always be surprises!--and not all of them are pleasant!

Loving hugs,
EA

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-07-27 07:42 PM


Gem:

I must echo Linda above, for once
and also this:

You are stranger to me
the one I know so well

sometimes I equate this with a person and sometimes myself
So much in this write in itself
xxoo

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4 posted 2003-07-27 07:48 PM


Choke from dislodged words
usher you to back row

Awesome write gemjop!! hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-07-27 09:42 PM


Remember the ABCs i sent you, and did i mention..welsh?
gemjop
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6 posted 2003-07-27 09:46 PM


Nuff said.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

cusick
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7 posted 2003-07-28 04:59 AM


I am a stranger to you but look forward to more of your poems.Maggie
Ericc
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8 posted 2003-07-28 08:00 AM


Wow Gem...you words are always so powerful and moving. You tap this source from somewhere deep.
Eric

Kaoru
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9 posted 2003-07-28 08:57 AM


Very powerful and sad, gem, but I relate..

You tell me to stop reading your mind,
well,
stop reading mine, first.

[This message has been edited by Kaoru (07-28-2003 08:58 AM).]

HopeS
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10 posted 2003-07-28 09:06 AM


They do say that "life is but a stage "
perhaps when the tears  fall , it is time for that inevitable curtain call

Hope

Ladybug
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11 posted 2003-07-28 10:27 AM


Awesome write, Gem!  I really love your style!

Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end...

gemjop
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12 posted 2003-07-28 10:38 AM


Thankyou for the kind words.

but really, this stinks, and so does the feeling that goes with it. just a stupid vent.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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