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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-27 05:12 PM



Blind

pour
settle into
the creases
and folds
be thick
bold
for at times
I am
blind

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-07-27 05:13 PM


I am always blind . . .
not in the essence you display
and beautifully I may add
I just noticed your quote . . .
xxoo

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-07-27 05:15 PM


grasps his foot which just smashed into the coffeetable...apparently so am I

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-07-28 08:05 AM


Hauntingly beautiful.
Eric

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4 posted 2003-07-28 09:26 AM


Aren't we all.....

I love the sensuality of this one -- instead of reading, you could pour it out and drink it.....

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garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-07-28 09:32 AM


Yes, sometimes I am blind too, Helen.
Is that good or bad??  
Hugs  
Ethel

Ramon
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6 posted 2003-07-28 10:10 AM


At times we are all blind. Some of us in early in the morning.
gemjop
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7 posted 2003-07-28 10:12 AM


Ah sensual...can really get your teeth into this write, be bold, yes...

another library addition, thanks Helen. xx

Instant karma's gonna get you.

S Arthur Grey
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8 posted 2003-07-28 10:19 AM


Better to be blind sometimes.
Excellent write.
Open, deeply sensual . . . thirsty

s.a.g.

cusick
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9 posted 2003-07-28 10:33 AM


This says so much in so few words. Beautiful. Maggie
passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-07-29 04:53 AM


me too
wranx
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11 posted 2003-07-29 09:35 AM


So many with this same affliction...Well done, Helen.


Ed

LeeJ
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12 posted 2003-07-29 09:46 AM


love is most definately blind...and perhaps should be that way....all the better to love
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13 posted 2003-07-30 06:10 PM


enjoyed
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