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The Kiss
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The Kiss |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 The Kiss by Gustav KlimtMy yearning started at the beginning of time and throughout my lives I found your sweet lips waiting to touch mine. I know the pure magic of being drawn irresistibly into each other’s arms reaching out across distance, our lips parting expectantly. The hearts sing of love and our breath quickens, sighs of desire travel at light speed, always hitting the tiny target. Tears of deep longing running down our cheeks sipped in mutual devotion to clear the path of pleasure, while approaching our lips. Even though I know we dwell in each other for eternity, this moment of deep rapture wants to be lived again and again, as nothing compares to its depth. Come my Love, meet my lips, they are the door to the land of bliss where the floods of passion know no boundaries or restraints, come, join me now for a lingering Kiss. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
this moment of deep rapture ironically i thought the same as i read your words. Abbracci, che fuoco nel cuore tua! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
If you insist...fantastic writing...James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wow... the picture... the words... the feelings! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful Margherita! You have penned the moment with eloquence and passion As you always do Even though I know we dwell in each other for eternity, this moment of deep rapture wants to be lived again and again, as nothing compares to its depth. xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I bet you didn't have to wait long for him to pucker up for that "lingering kiss"!  Delipcious piece of writing! Luvs 'n hugs, Linda |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Pure beauty. Love, Eric |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
And with your last word, my heart sighed deep. This is beautiful! Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh how lovely! Nothing like that long awaited kiss. Very well captured here. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Even though I know we dwell in each other for eternity, this moment of deep rapture wants to be lived again and again, as nothing compares to its depth. Come my Love, meet my lips, they are the door to the land of bliss where the floods of passion know no boundaries or restraints, come, join me now for a lingering Kiss. Oh yes, Margherita!! You know that I know this!  Hugs  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Now who could resist this. Well done, enjoyed. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ This is about as lovely as they come~ You captured the magic of the lingering kiss to perfection~ Gorgeous, dear poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Perfect !! hugs, Chris  "At one glance |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
justa beautiful! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Even though I know we dwell in each other for eternity, this moment of deep rapture wants to be lived again and again, as nothing compares to its depth. I've picked up my pen so many times trying to describe just this... something that seems so simple as lips meeting... but rocks the very foundations of our existence. After many failures, I thought it was an impossible task... but you've proved me wrong. *S* This is perfect... and going into my library! *S* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you beautiful poet friends for your loving replies and for enjoying my words ... Isn't kissing just heavenly ...?! Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - lips are waiting, soulfully in anticipation, pucker, pucker... BC |
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