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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-07-27 03:48 AM




*~*

As the sunlight arrives

you have

convinced me to love you

without questioning yourself

let your mind enter me

your flesh trembles at my touch

we have entered the dimension

*~*

[This message has been edited by QjQ (07-27-2003 03:59 AM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-27 03:51 AM


good write Glenn...but the thought of crumbling flesh just kinda ruins it for me
QjQ
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2 posted 2003-07-27 04:00 AM


thanks dixie!!!!!
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-07-27 04:25 AM


oooooohhhhh yes! now you're talkin'!
Margherita
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4 posted 2003-07-27 05:32 AM


You needed to be convinced? I agree the merging can only take place without questioning ... just through unconditional love ...
A most pleasant new dimension.
Love, Margherita

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