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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-07-27 01:08 AM



Walking in shadows
as all you sunlight drinkers
say I'm wrong to be

I speak my feelings
knowing how many footsteps
you could walk as me

while you criticize
with mirrored inspirations
I am walking free

©2003 by icebox

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vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-07-27 01:16 AM



"while you criticize
with mirrored inspirations
I am walking free"

No criticism here...just smiles.

You're so cool.

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-07-27 03:17 AM


Amen!
Kahlil
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3 posted 2003-07-27 11:36 AM


Right on!  Never change that about yourself.  Oh man, you have been a big help to me this morning, thank you!
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4 posted 2003-07-27 11:41 AM


No doubt about that -- you are one of a kind.

....and this one hits my library. I want to read it again, at random times, just as a reminder to be who I am, as you are who you are without reminders.

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Martie
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5 posted 2003-07-27 11:56 AM


icebox

The way you write your truth is real and warm, even in shadows.  

SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-07-27 12:04 PM


That's tellin' 'em! No one knows what *really* goes on inside you. How can they? They aren't in your skin. They don't know what your thoughts are, and what your reasons are when you do something, yet they criticize. This write showed me strength to stand for yourself, and also strength to see that others, in their judging only show their narrow way of thinking!! If they do not ask then they only have a narrow, thin bit of information in which to make their opinion about you, or your actions. They should get the information from the horses mouth first then make their judgement call. If they know the information then, and only then can they make an opinion, and then it's not for any *us* to judge. That's Gods job. Too big a pair shoes to wear for me. Just my thoughts. Thank you for letting me express them.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
7 posted 2003-07-27 02:17 PM


Thanks ice i needed to read this today
gemjop
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8 posted 2003-07-27 08:21 PM


sunlight drinkers! bloody amazing.

one for the library.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2003-07-27 08:26 PM


Your quill is brill and this is definitely a !

Love reading your thoughts and philosophies!
You have your own special niche here as Passions, Dear Box of Ice!


EA

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