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I am...a challenge too
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I am...a challenge too |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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I am a pitbull some might say, but have a tender heart I wonder about internet, of wich we all take part I hear the music in your words, when I read all your rhymes I see the laughter on your face, when you read mine sometimes I want to write good English poems, but I am not so smart I am a pitbull some might say, but have a tender heart I pretend I make a difference, in all the things I do I feel the burden of all sorrows, even those of you I touch the soul of someone far, hope it will touch me back I worry ‘bout my gain of weight, cause I love every snack I cry when children die of thirst, it isn’t a good start I am a pitbull some might say, but have a tender heart I understand staying up late, will undermine my health I say difference should be less, b’tween poverty and wealth I dream the world would come to be, a better place for all I try to fight for all things worth, but I am just too small I hope we’ll always stay connected, through the words of art I am a pitbull some might say, but have a tender heart Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Titia:You are all of these woinderful things you post.You touch the hearts of many and will continue on.This was a challenge well met. angelblueyes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If you're a pitbull, I'm glad you're OUR pitbull! You excelled at the challenge, Titia...and very well, indeed! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I am not so sure of the pitbull ..... but I am certain of the tender heart. Beautiful write here Titia. hugs dear lady, Chris  "At one glance |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Oh Titia: Sister poet! You ARE the truth with teeth, and a tender hand. Always enjoy your works. This was GREAT! TD |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Titia - well done indeed but here: I want to write good English poems, but I am not so smart I do disagree - you have taught me much here alone xxoo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Yes...all this and so much more... Love this...and love YOU! Hugs,  ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TenderHeartedTitia~ Indeed, Indeed ! I have met that tender heart and found a true friend~  Love you ... love your poetic rhymes~ My *knuffels* to Muys~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hugs to all of you, my dear friends and Dutch knuffels too. Yes, sometimes I'm a pitbull when it comes to fighting for something I believe in or when I see someone has set truth on a detour  But most of the time I'm just a little puppy. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
a pitbull can be a puppy, and a puppy can be a pitbull. Both have qualities to admire, enjoyed the poem. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
--and you're the sweetest, most lovable "pitbull" around!  Enjoyed reading more about who you are!  Linda |
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