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Poe_Pot_Pie
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 107
Canada

0 posted 2003-07-26 06:45 PM


This is for anyone who thought I was trying to make fun of this challenge:

I am a bit everything,
But still nothing.
I am trying to prove myself,
To anyone and everyone.

I am an entertainer,
Attempting to bring a laugh or smile
into someones day.

I have my own problems,
But I add your problems to my load.
I do not help,
But rather do unnessary work.

I make people think they are in my life,
While I push them far away...
Destroying friendship slowly.

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eminor_angel
Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323
Canada
1 posted 2003-07-26 07:01 PM


This is very deep. I feel like I know you, even though I've never met you. I wish my sister were just like you, she's really a witch, and writes really weird poetry. Yours is so much better!
Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
2 posted 2003-07-26 10:59 PM


You are a very unique you.
And I am happy to read you. *s

I bought my share of mistakes so I might see some interest.
~Dorene

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-07-26 11:45 PM


Yes, you are special,
because you are you!
Hugs  
Ethel

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-07-27 03:34 AM


we are a little alike then
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