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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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0 posted 2003-07-26 05:42 PM


Just couldn't resist writing you an answer Deer /pip/Forum80/HTML/003456.html

You’re just a sweet ‘ol’ balladeer with lovely tales to tell
We know that you are competent enough to do it well
Each time we get a chance to yell ‘take up your pen and write’
It is because we know my Deer your mind is filled with light
Your words have all the strength they need to weave a magic spell
You’re just a sweet ‘ol’ balladeer with lovely tales to tell

Your fantasies seem real my man. They feel like some hot shower
You are right, in inner minds, we can achieve full power
And certainly you’re touching cords in all the things you write
I’m sure you will dream lovely dreams when you turn out the light
And when senility hits you Deer and it will still your bell
You’ll be a senile Balladeer with different tales to tell

You’re right that nothing lasts forever, even ‘ol’ sweet you
But all the tales you’ve told my dear, they’ll stay, I’m sure they do
And all the tender things you wrote have touched our minds and soul
You often made us laugh and cry, you really reached your goal
I think I might speak here for all that you did really well
You are a great ‘ol’ Balladeer, with tender tales to tell

Titia

LOL and only just now I discovered it was a challenge Deer wrote to , but nevertheless I mean every word I said above


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (07-26-2003 05:52 PM).]

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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1 posted 2003-07-26 06:42 PM


And when senility hits you Deer and it will still your bell
You’ll be a senile Balladeer with different tales to tell


love it..and Titia, it was a great  response to his.
~smiling
Maureen

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
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2 posted 2003-07-26 06:43 PM


I have to agree with her.You are all that and more.an awesome answer.Keep going.
angelblueyes

Balladeer
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3 posted 2003-07-26 10:37 PM


I can't wait to see how those senile poems will turn out!!

Thank you, dear Titia. People like you are the reason I write. If I have ever put a smile on your face or nice thought in your heart, it is all worthwhile....thank you for such a wonderful response and I appreciate you very much, my Dutchie

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