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my attempt at the "I am" thingie...
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my attempt at the "I am" thingie... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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I am unstable and balanced I wonder if God can really hear me I hear my grandmother singing “Angel” Soothing my tears in the middle of the day I see my feelings when I’m truly intoxicated I want to be Sleeping Beauty awaiting eternal slumber I am unstable and balanced I pretend everything will be okay I feel myself slipping on silver tears I touch heaven when I allow myself to believe again I worry that I'll never find my King Arthur I cry when I think I’m on the verge of getting close I am unstable and balanced I understand that everything doesn't have an explanation I say I’m a big girl & I’ll just have to get over it I dream of the past everynight I try to push everything away I hope that someday I’ll see purpose in this life again I am unstable and balanced If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (07-26-2003 01:20 PM).] |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You did more than "attempt" ... you wrote an awesome piece!! Very much enjoyed. Chris  "At one glance |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
grins |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
me too girl, me too |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kris: God, this is wonderful! I am unstable and balanced what a thought indeed EXACTLY! thank you for sharing I know this was tough xxoo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kris, thank you for sharing this part of your self with us. These are hard, aren't they? You did really good.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your title is a wonderful example of your sense of humor! It certainly caught my attention!--and I also wanted to read a about you and get to know you better, Dear Kristen! You really pulled this off in style! And remember, it is a constant battle for us all to balance our lives on the proverbial fulcrum! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Kris! So very much enjoyed.. And, I would say you met this challenge head on! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
thank you all and ummmm honestly this wasn't hard at all...I expose myself freely  lol..errr like anyone is actually going to read this!?  *walks away now*If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kristen - your attempt is wonderful...thank you! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ceinwyn, sister poet: You ARE the fulcrom, the pivotal point of view...always enchanting in the way you let me see through your works. TD |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Kris:You did absolutely wonderful at meeting the challenge.As for the past and all that's in it.I assure you you will move on and life will be sweeter than you could ever imagine.  angelblueyes |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
why for you too good to me!? If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kris...I'd say you did a great job on this 'I Am' thingie... I enjoyed this.Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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