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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-07-26 09:31 AM

Words Spilled

From my heart I give a part of me
in sleepness nights of you.
The candle always glows in dark
when thinking thoughts of two.

The symphony that's played inside
the treasured moments of,
Will never be forgotten
in these memories of love.

I wilt at times, in warmth of you
on road of traveled time.
Alone I sit, and wonder at
these words for you I rhyme.

In fear no more, not hesitant
the answers seem to clear
The questioning, impanted thoughts,
releasing one last tear.

I sit between two candles now
appearing in it's glow,
A shadowed phase, veiled in dark
in emptiness of know.

If eyes I close, to see you there
in Wynter's flowers sown,
In recess of the morning light
your seeds become my own.

A day without the reign of you
leaves much to be desired.
In silence now your words are heard
then stilled too, are the fires,

That burned, emblazened you to mind
that thrilled, enticed me so.
The myst of you has lifted and
my life has lost it's glow.

So in the candlelight, a must
I fill my nights with rhyme
And kiss away the memories
of once upon a time...

But today I reassemble mine,
those many thoughts of you,
relaxed upon the lettered field
of cloud words on the blue.

With butterflies that shelter me
in warning, shielding pain
to guard with wings that lightly tease,
inside they come again.

I toast what was and free my mind
to stretch beyond these walls
and soak the drink of sweetened words
writ-tasting warmth that calls.

Inside me words just come with will
and allow, I, them to fall
to search inside what shelters feel
and share with you my all.

Dream collecting thoughts you give
embraced in mine to hold.
To dream or not, I wake to sleep,
in words spilled, rainbow's gold.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2003-07-26 10:36 AM

I sit between two candles now
appearing in it's glow,
A shadowed phase, veiled in dark
in emptiness of know.

If eyes I close, to see you there
in Wynter's flowers sown,
In recess of the morning light
your seeds become my own.

A day without the reign of you
leaves much to be desired.
In silence now your words are heard
then stilled too, are the fires,
==================================

so many poetically lovely lines in this bittersweet beauty...and as always your gift of rhyme shines.

A shadowed phase, veiled in dark
in emptiness of know.

In silence now your words are heard
then stilled too, are the fires,

those are excellent couplets of expression,
Well done poetess M.

"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

IntoTheFlames
Member

since 2003-06-21

Posts 92
Va, USA

2 posted 2003-07-26 10:39 AM

"The symphony that's played inside
the treasured moments of,
Will never be forgotten
in these memories of love."
SO true we can never forget the ones we've loved! Even though sometimes thats what would be easier. Great write, very emotional and from the heart!

~*Summer*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-07-26 04:40 PM

A beautiful flow of words...James

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-07-26 06:18 PM

Thank you Janet. I do enjoy rhyming when it happens

I am not so sure it is ever easier to forget the ones we love...even if necessary.Thank you Flames.
*s

Thank you James.

M

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

5 posted 2003-07-26 11:06 PM

You always write with a flair that gently flows. *s

Hugs,
Chanson

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-07-27 03:43 AM

Maureen, this is one of the longest ones you've written and I enjoyed every line!

VOE
Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 119
From the land of Camelot

7 posted 2003-07-27 07:07 AM

This is so very lovely, and with a grace that is soft to the reader's eye. Beautiful...~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-07-27 07:14 AM

I know a Lady or two
who is very proud of you
for this write...

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