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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-07-26 05:43 AM


Real

Don't try to change me.
I'm happy being who I am.
I want you to be a real woman.
I want to be a real man.
Let me.

JamesLee
July25
2003


© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Janette
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Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now
1 posted 2003-07-26 10:01 AM


Oh so true for we all should have an independant existence even when in love.

Enjoyed.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-07-26 10:12 AM


hmmm...so what's  going on in your life JamesM?
you always make me see you in a different light..
hugss
M

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-07-26 10:57 AM


Oh, yes, dear man! Hang on to your precious jewels so that you may continue to shine!


EA

Ladybug
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since 2003-06-17
Posts 236
Massachusetts
4 posted 2003-07-26 11:54 AM


Short, but very powerful.  And very true!

I just read "The Man in Her Dreams" -- common theme here.  Both good poems!


Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end...

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
5 posted 2003-07-27 05:25 AM


Yes ... let me!
Freedom in love is a MUST, unconditional love will do more, than any restrictions!
Beautiful James!
Love, Margherita

VOE
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 119
From the land of Camelot
6 posted 2003-07-27 07:03 AM


James, it couldn't be said any better then you did.......clear, straightforward, and with a gentle touch!!  ~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

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