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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-07-26 02:48 AM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

Open up your heart
And tell me how you really feel
When I'm lost in love with you
Everything seems so surreal

Nothing else seems to matter
When your heart calls out to mine
I feel like I'm in heaven
When I see your love light shine

With you I walk on water
You give my heart such a lift
Times with you I'll always treasure
Your love is such a precious gift

My love for you is cast in stone
I'm so grateful for each day
My love keeps growing stronger
Since the day you came my way

* * *

"Love......will put it's hook
into your heart and force you
to know that of all strong things
nothing is so strong, so irresistible,
as divine love"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2003-07-26 02:53 AM



Such a soft and tender verse, Sue.
Beautifully done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Crimson Moon
Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 52
NY, USA
2 posted 2003-07-26 02:57 AM


Simply beautiful...
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-07-26 05:34 AM


Enjoyed this romantic piece...James
Goldenrose
Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

4 posted 2003-07-26 05:40 AM


Realy nice writing as usual sue....love poetry at its purest.... thank you....

Goldenrose.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2003-07-26 07:13 AM


Hook into your heart indeed Sue
I have missed you and your daily
inspirations
xxoo

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