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Crimson Moon
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since 2003-07-21
Posts 52
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0 posted 2003-07-26 02:48 AM


Sometimes

I asked you last night
How to shrink my heart
How to twist it to blackness
You see all I ever hear
Is how big my heart is
How genuine it stays
That I deserve someone worthy
Who heart is as true
I try to tell you
You're so wrong
That inside me beats
A tiny cruel heart
You call me a liar
I hate you sometimes
You ask me
If I'd rather have someone
Or be loved by someone
I hate you sometimes
Tried to tell you
I was ready to go away
Be the reason a man cheated
You shook your head
I asked what made it impossible
You just said I couldn't do it
I'd hate myself and I knew it
I hate you sometimes
Then you began to ask
Why does everyone
Make you the shoulder
I told you to send me away
You said no
I hate you sometimes
I asked another then
If I have such a big genuine heart
Why am I the one all alone
Even now..
My questions remain
Unanswered
And still
I thank you sometimes



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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-07-26 07:21 AM


Oddly enough, I understand this completely

If I have such a big genuine heart
Why am I the one all alone
Even now..
My questions remain
Unanswered
And still
I thank you sometimes


xxoo


Crimson Moon
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since 2003-07-21
Posts 52
NY, USA
2 posted 2003-07-26 09:28 AM


Thank you littlewing.
It's been a rough week and I don't know how else to purge my thoughts without hurting those I care about.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
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3 posted 2003-07-26 01:24 PM


it's easy to hate them sometimes, yeah

purge on, you know I love your writing! and I love you


[This message has been edited by passing shadows (07-26-2003 01:24 PM).]

Crimson Moon
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since 2003-07-21
Posts 52
NY, USA
4 posted 2003-07-26 01:50 PM


Yes but sometimes not easy enough.

Thanks for the hugs sis. You're the best sister anyone could beg for.



passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-07-27 02:49 AM


you know where i am, always
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