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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-07-25 11:16 PM



Maitre’ Poet

Walk in and ask for the poem de’jour, and
who shall greet you at table high?

Woman, spike your heel behind this spine
Of tallest care,

Man, sit high and quiet, oh ye soul so lost,
Speak quiet debonair…

For food, it can be a lost soul’s dream, to
Slip life’s tongue into poet’s sweetest cream

Then fall into the quagmire deep
Where love and laughter could fall asleep…

To land into Alice’s dream where teacups,
And questions, and Red Queens Reign!

All that might be lost is found in our Maitre’ Poet,
A figment’s imagine of lost status quo-et’s,
Don’t say I’m wrong, for who could explain
Those who say po-em, and those who pome,
Can they be exactly song’s same?

I smile and wink, and look back at you,
For a poet’s mind simply leaves no clue

For where we would wander and where we would stay
A poet’s transference is ours, in mislay

How like the maitre’d we are, we sit in quiet
Then wait upon stars,
Who would our fortune so portend
To exude to us our habits, lives, then when…

We listen so close, with the most gracious ear,
As we layer our poems with cream, sauce or beer,
We roast and we flame our feelings that stake
Our individual souls, that we might make

A Poet’s Medallion, that we might be test'd
To kick up our notch, n'oblige, but blessed….

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (07-25-2003 11:26 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-07-25 11:30 PM


Red Queens Reign.

smile.



and winks.

Lady?

YER GOOD.

chuckle.

and hugs.

(are YOU talkin' to ME?)

(serenity exits, cackling...)


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2 posted 2003-07-26 03:43 AM


I'd say this poem hits the bullseye, but for you the center of the target is so perforated that your arrows go right through without even slowing down.....

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littlewing
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3 posted 2003-07-26 07:28 AM


Karilea:

*shaking head*
yes we are . . .

How like the maitre’d we are, we sit in quiet
Then wait upon stars,

beautiful mind you have there
xxoo

I HEARD that cackling up there  

Patricia
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4 posted 2003-07-26 11:36 AM


Smiling large at this one, Karilea... what I do see through my poet's eyes.  Too bad recent cloudings have left me both far and near sighted...perhaps blinded for a bit. Time to wipe the clouds and tears away for I have indeed wandered to far astray.  

This is just beautiful.

Patricia

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5 posted 2003-07-26 05:56 PM


Ahhh Karilea, you make me smile with so much clever m'dear.

my fav lines.....

For food, it can be a lost soul’s dream, to
Slip life’s tongue into poet’s sweetest cream


To land into Alice’s dream where teacups,
And questions, and Red Queens Reign!

How like the maitre’d we are, we sit in quiet
Then wait upon stars,.

Keeping this btw

Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


angelblueyes
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6 posted 2003-07-26 06:21 PM


Karilea:I loved this.you are absolutely amazing in your writes and in your heart.
angelblueyes

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