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IcyFlamez89
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0 posted 2003-07-25 07:38 PM


I am the Ice and Fire, intertwined at the root.
I wonder how deep my heart can feel, or if it can at all.
I hear death always aking to pay a visit
I see the eyes of the Moon piercing me.
I want to feel, to know true emotion.
I am the Ice and Fire, intertwined at the root.

I pretend to be wise to cover my foolishness.
I feel the stroke of the Sky's wispy hands.
I touch the rage of blazes with freezing glee.
I worry that loneliness will be my only friend.
I cry like a river when I can no longer hold it all in.
I am the Ice and Fire, intertwined at the root.

I understand that happiness must be deserved.
I say people are the epitome of destruction, but with their hands rests our preservation.
I dream of a reality of fantasies.
I try to be what the world wants me to be.
I hope I can be what I truly am and no more.
I am the Ice and Fire, intertwined at the root.


© Copyright 2003 George Salazar - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-07-25 07:41 PM


You are what you hope to be and more
thank you for sharing
xxoo

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-07-25 07:43 PM



...indeed, there has to a root, where fire and ice connect...because I've often felt heat to be cold; and cold to fan flames...

Well done!

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2003-07-25 07:48 PM


"I touch the rage of blazes "

That you did.

Yep, that you did...

thank you


ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2003-07-25 07:49 PM


Greetings IcyFlamez89, fellow poet:
You ARE the passion of mingling...sorely needed here.  
Great write.  TD

Martie
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5 posted 2003-07-25 07:55 PM


Nice to meet you IcyFlame....enjoyed learning who you are.
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-07-25 07:59 PM


I dream of a reality of fantasies


very nicely done *s
M

Nan
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7 posted 2003-07-25 08:18 PM


Be what YOU want to be, Icy... It's the only path to happiness... Nicely written, my friend...
wranx
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8 posted 2003-07-25 11:34 PM


Nicely done
And glad to meet you


Ed

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9 posted 2003-07-25 11:44 PM


Icy, I enjoyed reading who you are. It's nice
to meet you, Poet, Sir.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 2003-07-26 09:02 AM


"I wonder how deep my heart can feel, or if it can at all.
I want to feel, to know true emotion."

You feel and know...it's in these words..

"I pretend to be wise to cover my foolishness."

I do the same...lol

"I try to be what the world wants me to be."

It's so much easier being ourselves..

Very much enjoyed this!

Susan C.

IcyFlamez89
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11 posted 2003-07-28 11:56 AM


Wow, thank you everyone. I really needed some encouragement and you guys helped to lift my spirits. luv u all

~Icy

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2003-07-28 01:57 PM


If you are "Fire and Ice", then you have a built in balancing system! For the fire warms the ice and the ice cools the fire!


EA

IcyFlamez89
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13 posted 2003-07-28 04:33 PM


lollz, or an internal time bomb waiting to explode. Sometimes one overpowers the other, and no one around me likes it when that happens. I can turn agressive and malicious, or cold and apathetic. But when the two do balance out... it's a nice little moment of peace.
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