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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
Further from the fire, the colder you get abandon the source of desire, and forget passions and longings, a whispering inner voice: "I need air to breathe" and wondering why I ever did leave you |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Robert...I felt the ache in your words. So beautifully expressed. ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
oh my.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So often we don't appreciate someone until they are gone... So sad and so often true. Warm hugs, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-25-2003 03:55 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Damn...this really aches!! Well done! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Air does feed the fire and without it ... POOF ... it is gone. A poignant piece you have written here, dear Sir, and one that most likely will make a profound impression on many ... it did me. I am glad I did not miss this one. |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
You never know what you got til it's gone... Wonderful poem, and I love how you displayed it. To me, it looked like a heart with a bow on top, hee hee.  Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"abandon the source of desire, and forget" I guess sometimes out of sight really is out of mind. Good to read you again RF.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Robert, welcome home. This has such a sound of forlorn...and lonesome bell... and the crackle of fire fades to embers... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 God! this hurts! |
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