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Christina24rb
Junior Member
since 2003-07-25
Posts 13
Georgia

0 posted 2003-07-25 03:04 PM


Under the covers in my bed I lay
I close my eyes and begin to sigh,
as your memories flood my mind
with pleasant thoughts of every kind.

It's you I see standing in the rain,
beckoning me to you through my window pane,
to come outside and dance away
and cuddle and kiss and frolic and play.

Under the stars and moon and nightime sky,
A tear forms and I begin to cry:
with joy, with glee, with unending bliss,
because of this warm, passionate kiss
that causes these feelings of happiness.

It's you I know
who will be at my side
to love and cherish until the end of time.

Visions of you fill my mind
with every sort of imaginable kind.
I wish to be...
I long to see...
your gentle eyes gazing at me.

So take my hand and hold it tight.
It looks like it's going to be
another warm and rainy night.  


[This message has been edited by Christina24rb (07-25-2003 03:04 PM).]

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-07-25 03:09 PM


Christina - this is beautiful
Welcome to PIP!
You will fit in nicely
Check your email for a greeting from everyone here at Passions!
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-25-2003 03:15 PM).]

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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2 posted 2003-07-25 03:14 PM


It's you I know
who will be at my side
to love and cherish until the end of time.

Visions of you fill my mind
with every sort of imaginable kind.
I wish to be...
I long to see...
your gentle eyes gazing at me.

So take my hand and hold it tight.
It looks like it's going to be
another warm and rainy night.


Christina, this hopeless romantic loves this.
Yes, I think I will enjoy reading your poetry.
Welcome to Passions. I think you will like it here.  
Hugs  
Ethel......garysgirl


vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
3 posted 2003-07-25 03:18 PM



What a beautiful entrance, Christina.
Welcome to Passions!  I think you'll like it here.
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-07-25 03:22 PM


Welcome to Passions, Christina!

Your thoughts were beautifully expressed.

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

angelblueyes
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
5 posted 2003-07-25 03:32 PM


Christina:Welcome to passions.Your write was romatic, tender,and wonderful.I'm new myself and can already tell that you will fit in well.I look forward to reading more.
angelblueyes

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2003-07-25 03:35 PM


Sounds good...james
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
7 posted 2003-07-25 04:02 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS CHRISTINA!
Very beautiful first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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