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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-07-25 08:02 AM


With her opus completed “ May” gazes through her window
Watching us be alive briefly in the heat of summer
The total globe’s mind coupling in the moonlight
Standing in a married photograph singing notes of love
Intoxicated with beauty the bittersweet ache of resonance
With a softened voice daring us to follow
Toward a powerful light whitish blinds our eyes
Magic chants like passages of Othello
Claiming delight in a sublime harmonious affection
Orbs creating sweet bouquets comprehending articulation
Rainbows smile throaty breaths of golden chords
Like a harp and loyal flute
Our vast home spills over in silent adoration
Classical grace showers divine thought far beyond
Giving our spirit shimmering openhanded flight
Knitting closely an afghan of warmth and friendly faces
And there, I am waiting, prepared to venture forth again
Within this psychological landscape pregnant
With sunshine on my face surrendering to transitions
Of the eternal patron in this contemporary life
A monumental circle, filtering conceptual through radiant sky
Learning and waiting, waiting and learning
For this truth….this powerful significance of might
May is smiling now and waves happily her eternal seas
There perhaps he is…and waits for me to?
Life is perfect at best, and I think this when the sand and sea
Touches my toes….where the sun wraps me in an opened vast cocoon
And generations bubble history before me…in the now…what was
And will be…all together

© Copyright 2003 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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1 posted 2003-07-25 09:25 AM


very nice writing thank you...

Goldenrose.

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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Missouri
2 posted 2003-07-25 09:49 AM


You create great images with your words.

Patricia

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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3 posted 2003-07-25 10:11 AM


Life is perfect at best, and I think this when the sand and sea
Touches my toes….where the sun wraps me in an opened vast cocoon
And generations bubble history before me…in the now…what was
And will be…all together


Oh yes, Lee, I love the sand and sea, too.  
Hugs  
Ethel


Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
4 posted 2003-07-25 10:19 AM


Love the picture you have painted here. So many colors in the shade of love.
The next time you go to the ocean say hello from Bonnie J aka Bon-Bon. Tell her how beautiful she is.
See Ya sis Bon-Bon

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-07-25 04:06 PM


This descriptive write gave me many "Smiles"...


EA

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