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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-07-25 05:27 AM


The End

I can't pretend to
be what I'm not
and neither
can you.

Someday you will
say I'm not
the man in
your dreams.

That day will
be the end
of me and
you.

JamesLee
July25
2003

© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-07-25 05:40 AM


James,
This speaks of such sadness.I hope that you have found or will find the one that truly makes you happy.Wether sad or happy I enjoy your writes.
angelblueyes

JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 207
California, Usa
2 posted 2003-07-25 05:49 AM


I know james...I know.
Keep your head up.
and the best advice  I could give..
Lean on Jesus. Men just screw stuff up.

Jai

[This message has been edited by JaiOfHeaven (07-25-2003 05:50 AM).]

Ramon
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since 2003-07-22
Posts 28

3 posted 2003-07-25 07:15 AM


I like this
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-07-25 08:47 AM


James, I believe the hardest part of life is letting go of those we love most...and yet the greatest gift we can give them....peace my friend.
Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
5 posted 2003-07-25 09:34 AM


You are so right!  Be who you are so that the relationship is "real."  We were discussing this very thing last night.  

Excellent write!

Patricia

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
6 posted 2003-07-30 08:21 PM


JamesMichael:

I can only think of one word that describes this - beautiful.  

Janette
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7 posted 2003-07-30 08:42 PM


Oh my, I sure hope she never utters those words ... you are not the man of my dreams ... cause if she does ... pooof ... she will lose a fabulous man.

Enjoyed the truths in this one.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
8 posted 2003-07-31 02:44 AM


it happens, don't sweat it
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
9 posted 2003-07-31 03:13 AM


So sad..this is.

I'm pretty sensitive to this issue lately..
Losing love..

Almost anything could keep me from crying,
but this is not it.


Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
10 posted 2003-07-31 06:12 AM


Oh, James, it is painful when something inside tells you that there may be an end...but it doesn't always work out that way.  Hugs coming your way...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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