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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-07-25 01:47 AM



Rain drops fall sweetly,
with laughter, you and I run,
Into our old wooden love shack, discretly
Summers rain with you is fun,

Peering through the cracks of the walls,
Laying my head back on your chest,
We watch the rain as it gently falls,
You and I kiss, loose breath, rest,

Rain drops play sweet tunes,
Upon the tin roof silently we hear,
Romantic serenade echoes throuhout the room,
Pleasing sounds fill our ear,

Inside your arms I feel at home,
You are my life, my world, my being,
My heart never wonders or will it roam,
Forever with you, in your eyes I am seeing,

Hold me close inside your love,
As we lay back, side by side in our hammock,
Listen to the rhythm of the rain above,
Each drop, a heart beat, time on loves clock,

So peaceful here with you,
Tell me your stories you have read,
I love to listen, color to my life, a golden hue,
My mind fed, by every little thing you have said,

Smile with me, laugh with me, grow old with me, let our love be free,

All the days of my life, I want this,
Kiss me forever in the warm summer rain,
Hold me forever in your rain kiss....


True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-25-2003 01:58 AM).]

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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

1 posted 2003-07-25 04:20 AM


My love i can feel you in my arms...i would love to walk in the rain with you....wet and hot who knows what might happen.....

love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-07-25 05:20 AM


When I lived in Japan I lived in a house with a tin roof...it was fantastic...especially when it rained...james
JaiOfHeaven
Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207
California, Usa
3 posted 2003-07-25 05:41 AM


James, In Japan? I'd like to maybe visit there once.

Hey romantic girl...
You always make me miss my dove.
the one that makes my heart tug
memories splice
divide ice
cold then she'll entice
it feels nice.
Thanks for the thoughts! Pay you many pennies if I could.

Jai

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2003-07-25 07:59 AM


love and rain.........yes, yes,
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-07-25 08:49 AM


how beautifully the rain sounds...and your poems are always an insightful experience...thank you for sharing.
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2003-07-27 07:24 AM


Gold...you do walk in the rain with me inside our dreams together....I am in your arms....(hehe..who knows what would happen)
xxxLOVE ~ARH


Thanks : james, Jai, ink, Lee,appreciate all of you for taking time to read and reply and for your thoughts!

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