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Wading In {Duet between Wranx and Tiersdin}
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Wading In {Duet between Wranx and Tiersdin} |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Look there as you walk through the shallows How the clear, but rippled become obscured in muddy swirl once you take the next step Over into midnight Hold fast my hand Survival is only possible with the you and the I of this misadventure Have a care along this trackless, wet trace knowing, the farther we go risks a fall into black rapids The beaconing maelstrom Beware Beneath these shadows lie love in need, love in want make careful your step Or this craving shall be your own ~Wranx & Tiersdin  |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
How pleased I am to see two of my favorite poets take to the blue and fly. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Tiersdin!!! Great seeing your name again!--and your poetry! What a dynamite duo you and Dear Ed make!  Happy days are here again! You're back!--and in a big way, l'il darlin'! Humongous happy hugs to you both! A poem by: "~ Wranx & Tiersdin" ---what a pretty sight that was! Linda |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Hold fast my hand Survival is only possible with the you and the I of this misadventure Have a care along this trackless, wet trace knowing, the farther we go risks a fall into black rapids" The continuity of thought in this is really impressive you two. Not always an easy thing to accomplish in a duet. Good to read you again Tier. You too Ed...  |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
now there's a name not seen around here in a while this is wonderful you two and good to see you again Tiersdin been too long and you sore yet Duetman?  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Thank you Tier, For letting me insist we write together... It's really cool seeing your name here again. I'm sure others feel the same. And the write? I'm finding it easy to toss out a couple of scraps, and have a well chosen partner build something that works... Special Ed(ucation) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...absolutely exquisite! Good to read you here Tier. You two du-et so well. ~Hugs to you both~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You two are great together.Very interesting. angelblueyes |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thanks everyone for commenting and for the Welcome back. You know how much I really do appreciate it! Wranx, We definitely have to duet again. Thank you for the inspiration! *hugs* ~Tier |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Welcome back, Tier. You have been missed. And here ya are, carried back by the yeti. A wonderful dark tone to this duet...a bit cautionary, but echoed like breath in a cave. Nicely done, you two. And tier? Yes, do stick around awhile. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and the last stanza and lines shall be engraved and placed above my doorway . . . God, this is *smile* brilliant I do hope you stay . . . we need more of this please? xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (07-25-2003 05:40 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Hey witch! wasn't it good to see Tiersdin again. Maybe we can get her writing "dark". Susie, meet Tiersdin, a chum from the beginning. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Been offline for a few days due to computer problems, but thank you Serenity, littlewing, and all once again for the warm welcome back. *hugs to you all* ~Tier |
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