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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-07-24 01:22 PM


you are only in name
i am more than mine
bound together
in sanguine chords      
and nothing more

© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-07-24 01:42 PM


ouch
sad
does the pix mean you're only half aenimal?
LOL

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Kaoru
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2 posted 2003-07-24 01:45 PM


woo..

short, but so good.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-07-24 01:48 PM


I wondered who you were writing about until I went to the dictionary...

love the new pic!

Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-07-24 01:48 PM


Kacy thanks damn that pic i'm already ready to take it down..arghhh

thanks Kaoru i know I usually ramble

oops sorry Dix snuck in there as i was responding, thanks 46 chromosones

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5 posted 2003-07-24 01:48 PM


hey...there there..sorry about your pain

lol..I like your pic

Aenimal
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6 posted 2003-07-24 01:50 PM


thanks Liz i gotta get a new one though
littlewing
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7 posted 2003-07-24 04:47 PM


How that mind of yours
ticks away with these ideas
I get the 46 but the phrase,
"I am more than mine?"
and why rid of the picture?
It is lovely
xxoo

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icebox
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8 posted 2003-07-24 05:02 PM


A nice tight write!  I like it.

BTW the pic is fine; I had one like it once (only mine had a number under my chin *grin* )

IntoTheFlames
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9 posted 2003-07-24 05:15 PM


So much said in so few words! Nice write!

~*Summer*~

Bonnie j
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10 posted 2003-07-24 05:22 PM


Nice write. Sounds kind of sad.
And your picture you need to smile more and move a little to the left. LOL
See ya Bon-Bon

Gina Culliney
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11 posted 2003-07-24 05:48 PM


Wow!  That hit the gut! well penned.
Earth Angel
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12 posted 2003-07-24 05:57 PM


You have a wondrously deep, intense and fathomless eye!

Very artistic how you presented your fine physiognomy!

I have to admit that the title of your poem confuses me. XLVI --46? You look far too young to BE 46! What is the significance?

Anyhoo! Loved your pic!


EA

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13 posted 2003-07-24 05:57 PM


Hmmmm I like this Sir Raph; and your pic too

Maree

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whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


Aenimal
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14 posted 2003-07-24 09:37 PM


you are only in name 'my father'
I am more than mine 'giuffrida i won't be tied to that name and its misery always"
and rid of the pic cause its me

LOL ice nice i edited those numbers out

thanks flames

Bonnie i'm thinking i needed to step a little more to the right myself

Thanks Gina

Linda 46 chromosomes thanks

Thanks Maree *swooooon LOL

littlewing
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15 posted 2003-07-25 07:32 PM


thank you . . .
I am losing my reception

gemjop
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16 posted 2003-07-27 08:00 PM


pathetic isn't it.
how someone called father is only so through blood, and not by nature.

mine ignores me, and we're living under the same roof.

one for the library is this.

hugs you.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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17 posted 2003-07-27 08:06 PM


You are much too hard on yourself Raph.
Your words make me wince sometimes they are so poignant. As for your pic....you handsome devil you....LEAVE IT BE !!!! Chris

Aenimal
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18 posted 2003-07-27 09:38 PM


Sue play with the rabbit ears

Gem they say blood is thicker than ink but nothing is thicker than their skull

Chris me hard on myself? No it can't be..grins the pic stays...for now thanks

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Krawdad
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19 posted 2003-07-27 11:51 PM


Pic is fine, man, reminds of Jim Brandenburg's "wolf".


Kraw'

Aenimal
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20 posted 2003-07-28 01:50 AM


Thanks krawdad i knew it looked canine..grins
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