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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-07-24 09:53 AM



There Is Always Tomorrow

Maybe a change of heart
Since last we had spoken
Could it be circumstance
Why promises are broken

The promises I held within
I believed each to be true
Perhaps that's why I linger
Having shown faith in you

Of the past conversations
Where we shared lovingly
Hope you can remember
What you had said to me

There is always tomorrow
For repairing the broken
To be continued hopefully
Where honesty is spoken

HopeĀ©2003

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Ericc
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1 posted 2003-07-24 10:06 AM


So uplifting!
Thanks,
Eric

HopeS
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2 posted 2003-07-24 11:02 AM


Thank you Eric , when I am down I do try to look on the positive side
Hope

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-07-24 01:58 PM


Lovely writing...James
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4 posted 2003-07-24 02:01 PM


Hope, your style is unmistakeable

tomorrow, yes...good write packed with emotion

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5 posted 2003-07-24 02:07 PM


Hope, I really hope that he reads this.
There is so much love and longing in it.
Hugs to you, Lady  
Ethel

gemjop
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6 posted 2003-07-28 07:43 AM


This is going into my library, because I feel it so badly in my bones. tomorrow is all we can think about, hoping for some answers. and we recall those promises, we know they felt and meant, but are at a loss to know why they were broken. circumstance, people change, they fooled us? who knows.

It makes you want to never trust someone with your soul ever again, Hope, you always get my mind ticking on overdrive.

much love to you,
gem xxx

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Patricia
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7 posted 2003-07-28 07:51 AM


There is always tomorrow
For repairing the broken
To be continued hopefully
Where honesty is spoken

Thank you!  I need to hear this.  Honest words indeed!

Patricia

cusick
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8 posted 2003-07-28 08:13 AM


Lovely read. There is so much optimism in the last stanza.
HopeS
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9 posted 2003-07-28 08:19 AM


Thanks gem , yes I am often asking "Why
and waiting for him to reply

Hope

HopeS
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10 posted 2003-07-28 08:20 AM


Thank you James , your kind reply is so appreciated

Hope

HopeS
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11 posted 2003-07-28 08:22 AM


Thank you Dix , yes there are always tomorrow , I hope ends some of my sorrow

Hope

HopeS
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12 posted 2003-07-28 08:24 AM


thank you Ethel for your caring reply , yes I did send this to him

Hope

HopeS
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13 posted 2003-07-28 08:25 AM


Thank you Patricia , yes I only wished others could be more honest

Hope

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14 posted 2003-08-01 10:14 AM


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