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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Step lightly here Among the wandering beast of logic That graze in intent concentration On the blades of knowledge Required Desired To sate the hunger Burning deep in the edges Of understand. They do spook easily In a threat of sound from beating heart That poet might allow Too loud a resonance Or the sound of breath Sighed to a thought of holding Something softer than Euclidian precepts Footfall Waterfalled on plains of arid Contrition mimic fluid thought As poet in me attempts Evading trample of deconstruction E A C H Vowel And Every Assonance Subject to the beasts red eye Torn asunder in the sweet By And Bye Step softly I’d not have you Trampled too |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and here I am armed only with binoculars and a camera... You brought me on a safari, cap. This was a hushed read for me...I think I read it on it tiptoe.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Step lightly here Among the wandering beast of logic That graze in intent concentration On the blades of knowledge Required Desired To sate the hunger Burning deep in the edges Of understand. They do spook easily In a threat of sound from beating heart That poet might allow Too loud a resonance Or the sound of breath Sighed to a thought of holding Something softer than Euclidian precepts Footfall Waterfalled on plains of arid Contrition mimic fluid thought As poet in me attempts Evading trample of deconstruction ==================================== bout time ya got yer poetic butt in here..the moth was getting the shakes  They do spook easily In a threat of sound from beating heart So you've met me muse then. step lightly? .... not a problem... the moth will flit right over them as she inhales every divine word They do spook easily In a threat of sound from beating heart That poet might allow Too loud a resonance Or the sound of breath Sighed to a thought of holding Something softer than Euclidian precepts DEEEEEEEVINE indeed. *sigh* "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Logic be damned [at times] for I would read the lighter step you leave on the trail toward the lake, and watch the placid water in your eyes. Welcome back. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
My friend, I immerse myself in your logic. You have to know how wonderfully your words impact me. Ron, you make me think on another level, and you have no idea what that means to me. Please continue to bring your insights to my open mind. If you have no objections, I would like to read this for another who has in the past months forced me to think on another level as you do. Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Captain.. Since I am not quite awake.. may I, tuck this away for another read later? In the meantime...I shall tip toe very softly over your words...  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
As poet in me attempts Evading trample of deconstruction And allows us to just watch the show. *S* This is excellent, Cap'n... I'd applaud except my hands are stilled in awe. *G* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron...Amazing....deep and honest. Good to read you.  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very fine write Concurring with the above "The sweet by and by" Great choice! Ed... |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Step softly I’d not have you Trampled too ...okay...good write. really loved this one. See? no neeners |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Wonderful write Captain.. Since I am not quite awake.. may I, tuck this away for another read later? \ just echoing from over here too quiet in this library right now.....will view again |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Very interesting write, Captain. One to read and ponder again... ~Tier |
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