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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-07-24 07:11 AM


RT&O#700

In the predawn times
And the storms of last night pool,
Before warming comes
Fog shrouds and breezes are cool,
Before the sunshine
And the crowds have yet to fill
Too late, too early, and still.

Gloom

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VOE
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since 2003-07-10
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From the land of Camelot
1 posted 2003-07-24 08:06 AM


Ah, but those are the times when the poetic heart comes alive, as yours did here! Enjoyed your random thoughts, and anxiously await Number Seven Hundred and One!!  ~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-07-24 09:59 AM


too late, too early and still...

how true
M

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-07-25 10:37 PM


I liked the interim  between now and then....
before the gloom sets in!

I do, and I did!!!


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