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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-24 03:17 AM



Journey

I walk down
familiar streets
knowing where
I should
be going
to find
myself making
wrong turns

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2003-07-24 03:20 AM



Oh yes...been down those streets.
Well said, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Edder
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2 posted 2003-07-24 04:37 AM


short and full of wisdom...as always
S Arthur Grey
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woven by a poet's loom
3 posted 2003-07-24 02:30 PM


I don't think you are lost.

Sounds like the streets have been renamed.

Need to draw a new map.


garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-07-24 02:33 PM


Helen, it seems so hard to find
the right street sometimes, doesn't it?
Hugs  
Ethel

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-07-25 07:26 PM


Good God Helen
I thought I was the only one . . .
xxoo

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6 posted 2003-07-26 03:58 AM


.....and for those streets there is no map, except the one we draw afterward.

Well done, my friend.

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PKreturns
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7 posted 2003-07-26 10:13 AM


As long as you don't take a U-turn you'll be just fine helen *S*
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