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Ishmael
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0 posted 2003-07-23 10:20 PM



Dogboy considers an exchange of promissory note for a 20 year mortgage


Dogboy wondered aloud
As he watched the young darlin’
Walk away, all awiggle
“Just what could I trade to get a couple of decades
carved off of my life?”

Countered The Worm
“You may not like losing, what little you have left”
“To regain something not lost”

“Ahh” Said Dogboy, But, to do it all again”
“While knowing what I know now…?”

(“Not exactly” laughed Iggy)
(“True, you’d be twenty years younger}
(“But a quarter pound lighter)


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1 posted 2003-07-23 11:22 PM


Ahh” Said Dogboy, But, to do it all again”
“While knowing what I know now…?”

Sounds like a smart question, and I am sure all three know the answer yes?

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2003-07-24 12:12 PM


*chuckles*

Cool write, Ish...

May I call you Ish?

*smiles*
~Tier

brian sites
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3 posted 2003-07-24 01:55 AM


ouch
losing ya packidge
for gainin back your youth?

hmmmmm

self-defeatin it seems to me

good one Ish

[This message has been edited by brian sites (07-24-2003 01:55 AM).]

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4 posted 2003-07-24 12:49 PM


“Just what could I trade to get a couple of decades
carved off of my life?”
**
LOL, I'd trade all my well earned frown dents.
Maybe I'd even trade...
never mind.

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