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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ Summer nights lie still beneath a canopy of stars warm and humid in the glistening fastened to the cling~ Strobing lights flash and sparkle drifting intimately in the grandeur spinning daydreams on display as midnight breezes through an open door~ Shadows rise and fall splashing against the break wall racing around my heart beat now I lay me down to sleep, I pray~ Humming softly in my slumber to the sound of rolling waves washing over my desire reflects the moon when it is full~ Soft and smooth like satin splays sliding over sideways slipping down and faraway beaded in quicksilver strands~ ~*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
blues...this is simply lovely. Left me with such a peaceful feeling. Nicely done.  Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Hey Bluesey....this is marvelous!!! I just love it! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Loved the flow and imagery here.An nice write. angelblueyes |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
may I have this dance in the silver moonlight upon the waves of dreams Mike . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I felt every line--and every word in those lines!  I love your poetry, Lori!   Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh how simply dream like! love this, Chris "At one glance |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Summer nights lie still beneath a canopy of stars warm and humid in the glistening fastened to the cling~ Strobing lights flash and sparkle drifting intimately in the grandeur spinning daydreams on display as midnight breezes through an open door~ Shadows rise and fall splashing against the break wall racing around my heart beat ============================= 3 words........ BEU TI FUL!!!!!!  I do so love it when ya seduce us with the blues....lovely lovely lovely poetess Lori-girl...so surreal and serene. "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm so happy to know that, thank you Vicky~ Angel Lady~ You make me smile, thanks for lovin' it. Thank you, and welcome to passions, angelblueyes~ I meant to tell you that before and I'm glad you're here. How do you do and thank you kindly, gentleman, Mike~ Linda~ That was so nice of you, I can almost hear your tone of voice...and I thank you, sincerely. Hi Chris~ Poetry is like a dream fulfilled, in lots of ways. Thank you so much for reading. There you are again leaving a little something for me. Thank you for always supporting my efforts Janet Marie. Seducing you all with the blues, hmmmmmmm, oh yea, I like the sound of that. You are such a doll!!! I'm telling you, it's not about the moth! [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-24-2003 02:35 AM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I have three words too Ex quis ite! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...You write like silk in soft breezes...beautiful! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
bluesy- this is so you..and so great  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Humming softly in my slumber to the sound of rolling waves washing over my desire Picking a favorite part is tough when every line is so well written and evokes such peaceful images. *S* But I do love these lines... *S* Excellent work! *S* |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beneath a single moon, so many love stories yes, beutiful girliegirl, love that blonde! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Another beaded poem... so nicely done! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Shadows rise and fall splashing against the break wall racing around my heart beat Lori, this poem is so beautiful. I love it all.  Hugs Ethel |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Mysteria~ Thank you for that! I hope you know how special you are to me. Martie~ Thank you for sharing the goodness in your heart with mine. Wind~ So me, so blue, what else is new? Thanks~ Oh suthern~ You are such a special lady, and I'm so glad to see you here. Thank you, thank you. Michele~ Sometimes I wonder what's wrong with me, you're all making my eyes water. I really didn't think this was all that great, I'm somewhat flabbergasted. Thank you always, girlielocks. Thank you Lady In White for your lovely reply. Ethel~ Watch out now, I think I'm going over the top, thank you for everything dear one. The firmest friendships are formed with mutual adversity, like steal unites with the fiercest flame. (author unknown to me) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pretty write there Bluesy... TD |
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IntoTheFlames Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92Va, USA |
Truely beautiful work! ~*Summer*~ |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
beautiful! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Humming softly in my slumber to the sound of rolling waves washing over my desire " A beautiful image... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bluesy, this reminded me of lying in cotton sheets , french doors open to the sea, salt breeze drifting . . . . . . made me feel happy (OMG you have performed a miracle!) beautiful, you brought me to that place for a sec tweets xxoo |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This seems to flow, like the balmy breeze. Wonderful. Sandra |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
TD~ smiling, while hugging you! Thanks for sharing your summer, IntoTheFlames. Hi Robert Frazier~ Long time no see, how nice of you. Thank you icebox, you know I do. Exactly tweets, no wonder you're my favorite singing partner. Sandara~ Thank you, I've missed reading you, it's so good to see you here. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Always beautiful, great imagery, I felt it through and through. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks for feeling it Kaoru~ Have I told you lately, that I'm liking your poetry!!! (consider it done) |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Beautiful -- glad I'm back in time to see it. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Shadows rise and fall splashing against the break wall racing around my heart beat now I lay me down to sleep, I pray~" Sorry, would've been here sooner, but I wanted to make an entrance!!  Cool write Lori. I believe your coast is showing... |
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