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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-07-23 07:25 AM


The Big Bang

In the beginning
The big bang
The core was split
To Yen and Yang

And now we straddle
The wishing well
One foot in heaven
One foot in hell

© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2003-07-23 07:32 AM


Seymour, EXACTLY!
Very powerfully said and even in just a few words.
I agree!
Enjoyed and will keep it.
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-07-23 07:53 AM


Margherita
Thank you my dear, glad you liked.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-07-23 08:36 AM


Ah Yes!  I love it Sy!
Hey!  I'm back up from the dungeon today...
all fixed up and running again.
Ready for your tea sir?
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

scorpio
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right...there
4 posted 2003-07-23 08:37 AM


A bang-up write Sy...much enjoyed..
gemjop
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5 posted 2003-07-23 08:46 AM


so true, oh wise one. short, sweet and exactly to the point! loved it! xxx

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Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-07-23 08:47 AM


Nancy,
Glad your out of the dungeon, I'll be there for tea.

scorpio
Bang up thank you, LOL

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-07-23 08:48 AM


gemjop
You slipped in while I was answering, thank you.

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8 posted 2003-07-23 08:50 AM


Wow, Seymour....you're powerful tody with that shorty. I enjoyed reading it as I always do.
Have a good day, my friend.
Hugs        
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-07-23 08:53 AM


Ethel,
Thank you for the WOW.

Sunshine
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10 posted 2003-07-23 08:55 AM


Is THAT why I feel so stressed?
Because we're all straddling?

Sheesh - an explanation, as simple as that!

Good morning Sy!  

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11 posted 2003-07-23 09:59 AM


Seymour - very wise words to-day. Thoughts to ponder and remember. How about sweet butter tarts with tea? hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

Janet Marie
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12 posted 2003-07-23 10:13 AM


And now we straddle
The wishing well
One foot in heaven
One foot in hell

========================

Yer so Kewl ...
Im having Kool-aid instead of tea.



"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

ecrivan
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13 posted 2003-07-23 10:16 AM


lots of depth despite the size, much enjoyed
Sy


Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-07-23 10:18 AM


Good morning, Mr. T!

--and that's the truth, folks!

Loved this!

Angel hugs & kisses,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2003-07-23 01:25 PM


Sunshine
Exactly It's up to each to get their yen and yang together again. LOL

Chris,
My pleasure, thank you. Hugs

JM,
Kool-aid, that's a first.
WWRS

ecrivan
Thank you my friend.

Earth Angel
And that's the truth for sooth.


Munda
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16 posted 2003-07-23 01:48 PM


Amazing how you manage to say so much with so few words!
Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2003-07-23 03:07 PM


Thank you Munda

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