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Of Fire and Light (Duet by timothysangel & littlewing)
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Of Fire and Light (Duet by timothysangel & littlewing) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Frozen in time bearing my selection I call to the winds to change my direction Four corners beside me above and below To you, Mother Earth I do bestow For the Watchtowers guard and know thy way, A divine spirit aside natures buffet. Within my soul a flame shall burn to light my shadow as I watch and learn On a summer’s eve moon in view Two have gathered To start anew Silver and gold Silver and gold Southern heaven and Eastern hold With Eastern Onyx and Southern Agate celebration of harvest lying in wait Fire of the South we ask of Thee Passion and love by wind and sea Upon this slate grab hold of my hand wolf and butterfly to the mortal man Southern Water Eastern Earth May Guardians grant A renewing birth Corners called wait and see hearth fire of protection, Blessed Be! Journey uphill Two souls abound an echoing lament heard all around, "Thrice returns, peace instill An’ it harm none, do what ye will.” |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
THis is an amazing write, flawless and beautifully written you make a great team. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh yes..I do love this one. You two make a great team and I hope to see more duets from you in the future. Wonderfully done.  Hugs to you both,  ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it turned out just BEAUTIFULLY! I'm impressed! wonderful stuff you two! it's in my library! |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Duets are usually unique. The fact its not one mind!!! cheaters! j/k It was tight. Jai |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
WOW! - Thanks Raph Vicki - I think we may indeed Dix - Thanks gal, remember...the three of us next time around! Jai - Couldn't have done this one alone! |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Truly amazing.. and not only does it not harm anyone.. it truly, truly helps.. to see and know that beauty exists and can be shared, freely.. sigh.. write on Pepper |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
This is a masterpiece...The words flow smooth and melodic and this piece is a joy to read...well done by both of you... Anwaar |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
BRAVO YOU TWO !! EXCELLENT ! HUGS, CHRIS |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Fire of the South we ask of Thee Passion and love by wind and sea Upon this slate grab hold of my hand wolf and butterfly to the mortal man Tima and Sue, this is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever seen. Absolutely beautiful!! I'm keeping this one.  I sure do hope that you two do more of these together. I hate to go on and on, but this is so pretty!!!!!  Hugs to you both Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, I think you both would have known how I'd respond to this wonderful write! Simply marvellous--both poetically and conceptually!  Loves and hugs to you both! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I swear I'd lose my halo if it wasn't attached! ....there, NOW it is saved!  Linda |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Silver and gold Silver and gold Southern heaven and Eastern hold OOOOOHHHHHH smoooooth. Excellent stuff here ladies. you do make a good team. xxxxxxxxxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Raph - flawless and beautiful? That is a lovely compliment thank you Thank you Vicki - Tima was so very easy to write with Thanks Dix - now if we could get the three of us . . . Thanks Jai - tight - I like that no cheaters . . . lol try it - you learn a lot from dueting pepper - how sweet - is exactly the feeling we wanted to convey Anwarr - thank you so much - was hoping it would flow nice Chris, thank you thank you means a lot to me Thank you Ethel - gee to get that from you means a lot seeing as I hardly write pretty LOL Linda - yes I did know how you would respond and thank you - ummm . . . you sure you HAVE a halo? ahahah I am kidding . . 10 X's from gem!!!! We must be special Thank you m'lady - was hoping it would come out smooth Tima: it was amazing writing with you - I have never done an easier duet in my life - seemed as if we kind of shared the same brain on this one Thank you and no, I couldnt have written this by myself either Thanks guys xxoo |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
I've got three little ones under foot, so I can't take long here...hehe, but I did what to say thanks to everyone for the kind replies to the poem that Sue and I composed. It was an awesome first time experience, one that I would do again (and plan to very soon). Sue you are a wonderful poetess, and writing with you was such and honor...can't wait till the next time around! Love all you guys, and thanks so much for reading! Blessed Be |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"if" is a big word.... we'll keep trying...I'm sure it will be a good one when can get down to it! work, kids, sleep, love, school, life...internet comes in between somewhere we'll get it eventually  [This message has been edited by passing shadows (07-23-2003 03:07 PM).] |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
I love the dialogue - flows like a river! CD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue, no, I don't really have a "halo"--it's just a figure of preach! LOL Linda |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This is a very cool write..you two have conjured up a surreal and lovely poetic spell with this...I love the imagery and chanting word play. Wonderful, creative dueting poetess(s)  Well done!! "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
dammn go on with your badselves Sue sweetie lol when is it my turn!?  *tips her sierra mist to ya* errr haha sorry somebody spiked it If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Well...Blessed be! This was a fun find tonight! Ed... |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You two are an awesome pair.The flow, the imagery, the essence from you both was wonderful. I have to agree it's a keeper. angelblueyes |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Oh my, what a brilliant collaboration of minds. I felt the determination in every single word you wrote!! You did really good you two!! *applause* |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
two goddesses bringing their light and message of love to all on PIPS, thanks girls |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Dix - Yes! It will happen, when the time is right for all of us...can't wait either! CD - Thank you! EarthAngel - You know you have a halo...somewhere, all us ladies do! Ceinwyn - Thank You, Sue is a great partner! AngelBlueEyes - Thank you so much for the kind words! Bluesy - WOW! An applause....great...and hey, we can always pull up another seat if you'd like to join us! Inkgoddess - You and the PIP family are welcome! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I bow to the spirits within you both and wish you peace. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Tima - I cannot thank you enough for this You are awesome indeed and one amazing person Dix we will get it - (seven months later) lol Thanks CD - just what I needed to hear ahahaha Linda - your halo shines brighter than the Sun itself JM - now coming from you this means a lot to me thank you so much Kris - OMG - I was thinking exactly that today - I swear Thank you Ed knew you would like angel - wow - thank you so much! Love to hear the flow . . . Bluesy . . . applause - very cool thank you so much tweets Your welcome Michele - hey I learn from the best you know? icey, right back atchya, my friend Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (07-24-2003 04:53 AM).] |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
this is absolutely stunning...definitely going into my library |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Awesome duet, you two...so enjoyed! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
never realized how simmilarly you two write... I loved it, it was harmonious and fit perfectly |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
An absolutely beautiful collaboration. I don't want to know where I am going, it will ruin my journey. Carpe' Diem [This message has been edited by Mysteria (07-24-2003 12:01 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Ed - so sweet you are Thanks Martie! Liz, I know - freekeeee thank you Thank you Mysteria Thanks guys xxoo |
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