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Krawdad
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0 posted 2003-07-23 01:18 AM


                              Gorgeous


                              I can’t recall a richer sight
                              or ever saw one near so bright
                              because the angle was just right
                              from evening sun approaching night

                              Along the open road I cruise
                              against a bed of clouded blues
                              the most intense of rainbow’s hues
                              were there for me alone, such views!






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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-07-23 01:23 AM


beautiful...(home for lunch and took a peek)...h
JaiOfHeaven
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2 posted 2003-07-23 01:23 AM


Nah...
no amateur.
You are what makes the craft.
We all doo.
I liked how you described how gorgeous it was.
It was nice to hear about something gorgeous
besides the image of a woman.

Jai

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-07-23 03:32 AM


just gorgeous yes! I've seen it before many times, I'm blessed
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
4 posted 2003-07-23 03:36 AM



Gorgeous, indeed...
Enjoyed this one, sir.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-07-23 06:45 AM



There are some days
the skies reach down
and grab the glory of
one's crown...and lift it up.

inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2003-07-23 07:07 AM


thank you, i never thought you noticed

truly nice words,

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-23-2003 07:08 AM).]

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
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7 posted 2003-07-23 08:08 AM


Wish I could have seen it

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2003-07-23 08:33 AM


Oh so lovely!
This one take me..there.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
9 posted 2003-07-23 11:27 AM


great writing and lmao at Inked's reply
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
10 posted 2003-07-23 11:30 AM


A colorful piece of perfection!

Love & Rainbow Light,
EA

garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-07-23 11:30 AM


Krawdad, this is just beautiful the way you wrote
this. I love those rhymes on every line.
I'm going to keep this. Hope you don't mind.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Krawdad
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12 posted 2003-07-23 07:29 PM


h,
Thanks and hey, we should DO lunch.

Jai,
Yup, still an amateur . . .
Lots of gorgeous around, just have to look.

p.s.,
This was the best!

v,
Glad you enjoyed.
Hugs back.

Thanks, Sunshine.

inked,
Oh, did I forget to tell ya?
Well, now you know.  

El_,
Me too.

N,
Good, I hoped it would.

Ae,
Thank you, Sir.

E.A.,
Ooooh, the flattery!

g.g.
Keeper, eh?
You're welcome!

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
13 posted 2003-07-24 05:01 AM


Enjoyed...James
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