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The raiment of my pain
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The raiment of my pain |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
I sit here outdated but young staring into a brigt box thought Quick as a fox sung I had to see my eyes reply lines that my mind perceives I grieve what I am feeling Kind hearts are they deceiving? They were a part my soul bleeding distress my longings...needing The love that I am breeding. Heart cold it's dripping.. her hands increase the fold I'm told stop you've sold his.... I told you to stop It hurts... memories imprison me uncoil ungently jerks the chain The raiment of my pain... [This message has been edited by JaiOfHeaven (07-23-2003 01:41 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
i can see much thought went into this very nicely written,,,  |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Another beauty Jai!  |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
thanks y'all... Much appreciated. Jai |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
It hurts... memories imprison me uncoil ungently jerks the chain The raiment of my pain... Jai, a lot of emotions in this one. Good writing.  "If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Fo real? Thanks girl. Much appreciated. Word..! Jai |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Jai, you have a certain way, for sure...a format that I appreciate, a sadness that I love |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
I gots love for you too shadow. Peace out! Jai |
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