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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-07-23 12:50 PM


Sometimes, I wonder
if your beauty  was matched by
your song would I ask

I never needed
to ask

for your song

it sung
by itself


[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (07-23-2003 12:52 PM).]

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timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
1 posted 2003-07-23 12:53 PM


Oh Jason...this is truly awesome, and full of beauty.  I love your style, and your pen!

Keep em' coming!

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2003-07-23 12:55 PM



What lovely thoughts, Jason.
Beautifully said.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-07-23 12:55 PM


I see you and your muse are getting along quite well..great write jason
JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 207
California, Usa
4 posted 2003-07-23 01:01 AM


Nice..

Jai

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2003-07-24 02:47 PM


Jesus Jason

This is beauty . . .
xxoo

Gina Culliney
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since 2003-03-08
Posts 170

6 posted 2003-07-24 05:57 PM


Bring out thy beauty from deep within oh Darkling with but a mere stroke from thy mortal pen.  Hey for once I'm kinda speechless!  Well penned as always Darkling.
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