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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-07-22 11:00 PM



Shook free, the dew of missing you that covers me
When time picks the locket of the souls silken pocket

Estate of purest concentration, in tendering of love’s abrasion
By second hands, and duned white sands

Shook free, from bottom to the top, the breadth of me
Contented in the shell of poplar and beech, in peaces preach

Brought in, brought in and soothed, the comfort of all sting removed
In time, the telling tale, a quiet hearted nightingale

Shook free, those country miles, emotional turnstiles
Spin, a grin of golden memory, safe keeping at the core of me

Copyright Kkh 7/22/03


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-07-22 11:03 PM


I love the imagery this bringsforth.you have a a talented spirit and a wondrous heart.
angelblueyes

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-07-22 11:08 PM


youve reaped a beautiful harvest in this
poetry, so so nice. TD

timothysangel1973
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3 posted 2003-07-22 11:13 PM


WOW!  That was great!  Wonderful flow
QjQ
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4 posted 2003-07-23 01:05 AM


very very nice write  n  read,,,,



gemjop
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5 posted 2003-07-28 11:05 AM


Shook free, the dew of missing you that covers me
When time picks the locket of the souls silken pocket


wow. stunning, smooth flowing, and just ahhhhhhh....

Instant karma's gonna get you.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-07-29 04:58 AM


sigh
Patricia
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7 posted 2003-07-29 06:33 AM


TD...
Such a lovely early morning read for me.  Beautiful images and flow!

Patricia

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2003-07-29 05:49 PM


ThisDiamond~

'the dew of missing you that covers me
When time picks the locket of the souls silken pocket'


Such a word-sigh of originality~
VERY, VERY easy on the soul~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2003-07-30 04:50 PM


TD,

This was truly amazing!  And so are you.

Susan C.

Kaoru
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10 posted 2003-07-30 05:05 PM


Wow, amazing write!

Much enojoyed.

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