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Grains of Eternity (2000th post)
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Grains of Eternity (2000th post) |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Grains of Eternity I walked along the shore with my love. The place where waves caress the gentle sand. We pausedand I picked one single grain. I told her it took an eternity... to wear a pebble down to this lone speck. She watched as I placed it into her open hand. What I would like is to reverse the process I explained. From this grain of time... I wish to make an eternal pebble of love. She smiled and kissed me lovingly... As we continued on our way believe in what your heart feels... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I am impressed...congratulations...James |
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Chrissypooh Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 80Canada |
 CONGRATULATIONS on your 2000th post!! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"I told her it took an eternity... to wear a pebble down to this lone speck" Wow, I can't think of a more perfect 2,000th post. Congrats, btw!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
scorpio - may this love walk with you through endless time... BC |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Very cool and very romantic... Well done poet sir...the use of the grain of sand is poetry in motion A perfect poem to mark your milestone with. Congrats!! "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dear Scorpio..I wanted to be the first to congratulate you on your 2000th post.. But looks like a few beat me to the punch.  I can see why..this is a perfect post to celebrate this milestone. Your posts are so romantic, open and true. Thank you for gracing our pages of blue. ~Smiles, Hugs, & Cheers, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Very nice. Enjoyed the read. Bon-Bon |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I got so excited to see your 2,000th post, I forgot to say... thank you for sharing! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A wonderful tribute to love, as eternal as time itself. Wonderful write, and much applause for the 2000, and for gracing our hearts with your wonderful writes. Thanks Scorpio. TD |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you, james for your kind comments and support... Chrissy, thank you.. You're very kind Kaoru...thank you.. Yes I hope so too, Bill...thanks for your comments.. Janet Marie, I'm glad you enjoyed this...and thank you.. Nancy, you've been a constant for me here...you've inspired me with your words and encouraged me with your help and advice...I'm very pleased you enjoyed this poem...thank you for urging me on.. Glad you enjoyed it, Bonnie...thank you.. Karilea, I've enjoyed my time here...and sharing in pip is what we do here...thank you.. Your applause and words of support were heard and appreciated, ThisDiamond...thank you.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Congratulations once more to our newest Member Elite!  |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Very nicely done...beautiful expression... anwaar |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
She watched as I placed it into her open hand. What I would like is to reverse the process I explained. From this grain of time... I wish to make an eternal pebble of love. She smiled and kissed me lovingly... As we continued on our way Scorpio, I'm sorry that I missed this yesterday. I wasn't on the computer much. Congratulations on your 2000. I've enjoyed every poem and reply of yours that I have read. This one is no exception. It's just beautiful.  Hugs  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-23-2003 10:52 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You certainly posted a very special poem to mark your 2000th post! This is beyond beautiful...  A fine piece of writing from the pen of a very romantic man. Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
Congrats on your 2000th!  This poem is very beautiful. Love the beach imagery! Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you Nancy for the bump...you're too kind.. Thank you Anwaarhassan, I appreciate your comments.. Ethel, I'm pleased that you have enjoyed both my replies and posts...and I have enjoyed your words in pip as well...thank you.. Thank you, Linda...I felt that this milestone required a special effort...and I glad you liked it.. Ladybug, thank you...I appreciate your support very much.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A perfect commeration of love as well as the time you've spent here with us. Scorpio, thank you for this, and for sharing the simple beauty. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
A perfect write for your 2000th post.It was truly heartfelt.You are a great writer. angelblueyes |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
BluesSerenade,I'm very glad you enjoyed this poam...thank your for your words of encouragement.. Thank you angelblueeyes...you flatter me.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Thank you, Sy... believe in what your heart feels... |
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IntoTheFlames Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 92Va, USA |
great job, any woman would be lucky to have you! I loved how you described the time ti took that single pebble to form and tied it in with love...truely amazing! ~*Summer*~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I appreciate your kind comments In the Flame...thank you.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Aha! Found you! This time I shall remember to click the library button!! ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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