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Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-07-22 06:58 PM

I havent thought of a title yet guys so im just titling it love for now. any suggestions of what to call it please feel free

you gaze into my eyes
like im a beauty queen.
you say you love me
and walk around like
your in a dream.

I look at you and i see
a prince,you are the one
man i always want to kiss.

you touch me so deep in my
soul,but i still can't belive
you want to be with me till
your old.

you tell me you love me
and that i dont even know.
i ask you what you are reffering to
you say to me. your beautiful to me
because i love you.

I tell you that your special
in every way. you tell me stop
lying to myself, stop going on in that
way.

so i say to you what you once
told me before,i think that way
because your the one i adore.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2003-07-22 07:03 PM

Enjoyed...I have no problem with the title...James

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2003-07-22 07:10 PM

thanks. i dident want to use the title *Love* coz its used so much. i wanted something different hehe

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

pisumnux
Junior Member

since 2003-06-11

Posts 49
Troy, NY

3 posted 2003-07-23 12:05 PM

What a wonderdul uplifting poem! I loved it and I love you. I'm a very lucky man to inspire such beautiful poem from an even more beautiful woman.

"There are three things men can do with women: love them, suffer for them, or turn them into literature."
- Stephen Stills

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-07-23 12:20 PM

Alright, how about "Touching My Soul" James

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

5 posted 2003-07-23 12:24 PM

Frogs Can't lie Until They've Been Kissed

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-07-23 12:39 PM

I liked this.
angelblueyes

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

7 posted 2003-07-23 12:46 PM

How about..
"you are my master"? (kidding of course)
Nice write. Love is fine.

Jai

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