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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-22 06:20 PM

I'm afraid to
write now,
that I'm different in
mind.

I dont
want this
medication.
My heart's
beating out
of my chest and
it
makes me contemplate,
would I have
felt this way
if things hadn't
been the same?

Diabetic love,
remove the
sugar
from my lungs.

Should it
drop,
should I
feel dizzy,
I don't want
this medication..
My heart's come
to a
complete stop.

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

1 posted 2003-07-22 06:23 PM

I will take your medication...

nice write.

Jason

Ladybug
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 236
Massachusetts

2 posted 2003-07-22 06:50 PM

Wow, Kaoru, this is a really good, honest, emotional write. It reminds me of my friend, also a poet. I really enjoyed this, and I say keep writing!!!

Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end...

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-07-22 07:16 PM

Wow...!!!
Eric

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

4 posted 2003-07-22 08:13 PM

Go beneath the medication; find that which never sleeps and you will begin a new line of communication with self which the medication will not corrupt.

A good poem; take heart, the future waits for you.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2003-07-22 09:18 PM

Enjoyed this very much.

Maree

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-07-23 12:14 PM

Although one of my favourite writes was written in the grip of a serious painkiller spree(prescription relax children!)

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

7 posted 2003-07-23 12:33 PM

Firstly, I must say, You're beautiful.
No flattery intended.
I'd also like to say...
your poetry moves me gently.
Thanks!

Jai

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

8 posted 2003-07-23 01:03 AM

terrific read n write,,,,

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2003-07-23 12:54 PM

I feel like Aenimal didn't finish...

okay maybe I need the drugs..

Great write...

Susan C.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2003-07-23 12:56 PM

You come up with the most ingenius lines! What a creative mind you have.

Warm healing hugs,
EA

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2003-07-23 01:04 PM

Susan blame it on the drugs lol What I meant in my muddled way is that while i'm not promoting drug use for the writing purposes it helped me write some great things

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